|Reviews for Grim Vengeance|
| Mayflowers123 chapter 3 . 6/15
Lol, I read the phrase 'there is a ship on stand by on the main deck' as there is a ship on stand by on the main dick
| jada951 chapter 20 . 6/7
look forward to the completion of your trilogy.
but poor harry. never getting any peace in life or death.
| emthereble chapter 20 . 5/31
Wow what a fantastic fanfic! !
| birdandthebell chapter 20 . 5/24
Your series is absolutely fascinating! I'm looking forward to the next part of the trilogy.
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/3
i cant even imagine what harry must be going through
| Musichowler chapter 12 . 4/22
WAAAAA! YOU MADE ME CRY! WAAAAA!
| SonOfNenji chapter 20 . 4/14
This story has some redeeming qualities.
Short, bite-sized chapters make it much simpler to keep reading till finished. Harry's story and his actions are also interesting.
There was quite a bit of a snag with the above's connection to the cannon-verse and it's kind of sad you never wrote what happened to the X-Men besides Logan and the Proff being alive.
Not quite there for my Favorite's list, but plenty good enough for a Follow. (Author, since I'm awaiting a sequel rather than the next chapter...)
Good luck with all your troubles, anyhow!
| SonOfNenji chapter 7 . 4/14
That was pathetic.
You're copying canon almost word for word with a bit of Harry thrown in. There is no imagination in that.
| HelKat chapter 19 . 4/7
Ginny Potter new Kensley. Typo! ;)
| Shoetsu Otaku chapter 8 . 3/29
You know, I ended up having a dream when I put this story down for the day. It was a weird mix, I had so many plot holes. But Harry was in a classroom, he was going to school like any normal teenager. There were a few activities in the classroom I can't remember, but he got to know a student, whose name also escapes me but we'll go with Flynn(closest I can get) and near the end, as the story unfolds, Harry is walking on the sidewalk towards a field near the school, with a playground nearby. He sees a group of teens throwing a football, and one of the teachers, mr Whitehorn is with them, playing as well. Flynn is on the side, with another boy. And Harry slowly walks up to them. As he's walking, things seem to enter slow motion. When he gets to the edge of the grass, a poof of smoke and there is a baby toad in front of him.(I have no idea why Naruto was in this...) and harry ends up naming him. "Hm, I wonder what I should call the little guy, he doesn't seem able to speak. Why not...Gamabunta? Yeah, that sounds like a nice name. And harry proceeds toward Flynn.(I have no idea what happens to the toad.)again, slow motion, while the boys playing ignore him, harry recognizes some if the kids. Not quite bullies, but not people I would be friends with. People that look down on you. And the ball gets thrown in Harry's direction. He tries to catch it and fails, just skimming the ball with his hand. All the boys race toward the ball, whipping past him in that moment. Mr. Whitehorn walks after them, saying he'll try to control their chaos. Harry just nods his head and walks up to Flynn, finally. They greet each other, then the 3 of them walk to the playground and harry and Flynn get the urge to get on it. Harry hooks his elbow on one of the monkey bars and just swings back and forth. Flynn explores the rest of the play ground as harry watches him. Again, dream. The world spins and harry is face to face with death, and death says, "in all the years you have waited, why hasn't my other awakened?" And it ended there, I woke up. It was pretty interesting, but the way my dream portrayed it, it was really sad. Harry was just going through the motions of a never ending life, waiting for it all to end. And as it progressed, he mentioned or did things that we remember from some past, but he has no recollection of, due to his long, never ending lifespan. But I did wonder what death meant by other? I guess I'll never know. Thanks for writing! X/ I'm sure this is a really long review, but I had to share. I just woke up after all. I'll probably forget this all soon.
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/16
Are you still doing grin concludes
| killer4853 chapter 17 . 3/18
| SoulMore chapter 20 . 3/11
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 20 . 3/7
Good and awesome. following you now.
| sailormoonserenity99 chapter 20 . 2/18