Reviews for A Sniper's Wound, A Swordsman's Regret
Sinon is bae chapter 2 . 4/22
You better make the next chapter long. Pay up for this short chapter. Nah, in all seriousness, I think you're doing a good job. Keep up the good work.
ThatBoscoGuy chapter 1 . 3/11
I love this story (wtf is this guest doing.)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
i climb up the Stair to Sinon's bedroom i saw a female she wear a long white scaf she wear a green jacket i can't see her face her indigo eye stare at my blue eyes i climb up to Sinon bed on Sinon bed Sinon said to me hey Athena yes Sinon Sinon kiss me i kiss Sinon Sinon ask me to dance with her Sinon grab my hand i call for help help i shout i run away from guy i fall down at the breach i heard a bang some one shot him who are you i said to a girl turn around she said to me my name is Sinon. Sinon i said to Sinon so Sinon where did you come from real world i didn't know that hey Sinon want the fuck she go i stand up i looking Sinon hey Sinon where are you hey athena up here Sinon i turn around i saw Sinon climb down to me ohh Sinon i found you i hug Sinon Sinon hug me back Sinon keep me safe i keep her safe Sinon said to me hey Athena do like this game i saw Kirito was hugg me i
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
i sit down on breach i can't see dark. sinon lay on my lap Sinon hey Athena i look down at Sinon yes Sinon kiss my lip i kiss her lip. Sinon put hand onto my hand i climb up the stair to Sinon's bedroom i saw a female she wear A long white scaf she wear a green jacket she wear two hair clips i can't see her face her indigo eyes stare at my blue eyes i climb up to Sinon's bed i lay onto her bed Sinon look at me. Sinon ask me hey Athena. are you Alwake yeah i'm Alwake Sinon ohh good i ask Sinon hey Sinon want me. i said to Sinon said to me hey Athena said Sinon think you
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
The brown hair with blue eye is Athena. Athena is crying. Athena felt alone gun. Saw. Athena. Death gun want. To. Kill. Athena. Athena. Run away. From. Death. Gun. Athena. Run. Athena. Unn hello. is someone inside cave. Said. Athena. Saw. Sinon. Sinon said to. Athena. Hi. Sinon. Hi. Hey. Sinon. Save. Athena.'S life. Athena. Save Sinon's. Life. Athena. Lay on. Sinon 's lap. Sinon. walk. Down. To Athena's. home. Athena wake up. Athena put her glass Athena heard. A voice say. Now where. Athena. Athena climb down. The. Stair. Athena. Saw Sinon Athena. Sinon. Leep on Athena. Leep on Sinon. Sinon. Run to Athena.'s arm. Athena. Run. To. Sinon.'S. Arm. Sinon hugg. Athena. Hugg. Sinon asked. Athena. Hey. Athena do you love. Me. better. athena hey. love me better. Sinon kiss. Athena's cheek. Athena kiss. Sinon's cheek Sinon grab Athena. Grab Sinon i went to the library about Sinon i went out the library Sinon saw me uhh hi Sinon i said to Sinon
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
who there. who are you little girl. Her name is. Athena was. Running away she stop run Athena was tried i need some rest Athena fell a trap Athena can't see dark. wow it's pretty dark in here Athena saw light. Athena open the door. Athena where i . Athena was at wasteland. Athena she bare feet Athena spot someone Athena saw a teenager girl. And Sinon saw Athena walk bare feet. Sinon said to. Athena hey you who me. Yes you. Come here Athena walking to Sinon.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Who there who are you little girl name Athena. Athena was run away from a voice. Voice to. Athena has no clue wi
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Little. Athena. Know that Sinon. is. Her big. Sister Sinon know that little. Athena is her little sister. so she. Sinon. little Athena climb up to Sinon's bedroom. Sinon saw little. Athena. Little Athena saw. Sinon. Little. Athena running right into Sinon's arm. Sinon hugg little. Athena. Hug Sinon. Hey little Athena. Little Athena heard Sinon's voice. Little Athena climb to Sinon's bed Sinon pull little Athena close. Little. Athena pull Sinon close. Sinon grab little. Athena' s hand on her breast little Athena feel Sinon's breast. Uhh. Sinon why grab my hand. On your breast Sinon said to little Athena i kinda like you little. Athena. Said to Sinon i. kinda like you too. Sinon. Look at little Athena.'S blue eye. Little. Athena look at Sinon's green eyes. Sinon love little Athena. Little Athena love Sinon
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
The. Brown hair girl . With blue eye. is Athena. Athena. she a. heard. voice. Say ohh Want's matters you're afraid of. Sniper. i. give a fuck. You.'re. Name Athena. was safe. Whew that was close one. Athena. Lay on her bed. Athena wonder. i could visit Sinon. Athena remember that she was ten years old little gun. Told Athena. Hello little princess hello sir. Said little Athena. Death gun want to kill Athena. Athena didn't note. That death gun ohh little Athena. Come here little Athena death gun. Call to little . Athena . little. Athena. heard a female voice. Sinon heard little Athena's. Voice. Uhh hello is someno
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
the brown hair with blue eye girl is Athena. Was. Walking she heard a. Voice. Say ohh want's matter Athena. You're afraid the me i'm afraid sniper. How dare you. A liar. Want. I didn't call . i going kill to her. Athena. Safe whew that was close one athena wonder but Athena wish. The. Blue. Hair. Sniper. Girl name. Sinon. Watch Athena didn't noted that sniper girl Athena saw sniper girl Athena ask the blue hair sniper Athena hi she said to the blue hair sniper. uhh hi said. To Athena. So sniper girl. Are you doing here rest all night. Said athena. The blue hair Said. To. Athena. so. Wants your name Athena said. To the blue hair sniper girl. Hey Athena. Shout. Athena open the. Widow. Sinon grab Athena's hand. And Athena grab
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
The brown. Hair blue eyes girl . is. Athena. she looking a new friend she has nobody need her. She start to cry ohh Sun shimmer. she heard a female voice say i. Hate you i hate you so. Much she watch a girl lay
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
The brown. Hair blue eyes girl . is. Athena. she looking a new friend she has nobody need her. She start to cry ohh Sun shimmer. she heard a female voice say i. Hate you i hate you so. Much she watch a girl laying she slide to. The girl's arm. Sinon. she watch The girl. Cuddle. in
Chris chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Whoa, I just read this at 1:30 in the morning, and it gave me butterflies. I know I am gunna sound like a pussy for saying this, but I love the romance in SAO, and I'm gunna get hate for saying this too, but I ship Kirito and Sinon, not Kirito and Asuna. My review of this fanfic is my first ever review, and I give a solid 5 stars! It gave me butterflies in the end where Kirito kissed back... hard... But yea, great chapter overall, I have no problems with it.
Medes chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
By making Kirisuna a canon, that's the creators way of saying "FUCK ALL THE OTHER SHIPS!"
Well I say "NO FUCK YOU! #SINOTO" Great story btw, hope you continue.
Fireminer chapter 2 . 8/14/2016
Not bad, not bad. Please continue this.
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