|Reviews for A Wise Girl|
| Poet Wroet chapter 15 . 3/11
It really did me good reading this story.
| Poet Wroet chapter 11 . 3/11
.. Seriously? She has been at Hogwarts for, what, nineteen months total? First and second year? Lived at 221B for three years? And Dumbles calls Hogwarts her home?
| Poet Wroet chapter 4 . 3/11
Oh god, this had me crying. They do exactly what I wish someone would have - would - do for me.
I wish I had her courage.
| Obscured Angel chapter 3 . 2/15
I especially loved the first chapter of the story, but the second and third ones are good too.
About the spells you used for the trunk, there is a problem with the translations you used.
"Agrandir, ouvrir" translates to "Enlarge, Open" (adding an 'and' could make for a better synthax, the french translation would be "et")
The problem is the "Rétrécir, proche". Rétrécir does mean shrink, but proche means closer. The correct translation in this situation would be "fermer" whcih means to close something. You might also want to change the order to "Close and Shrink" (Fermer et rétrécir), it would make more sense for the trunk to close before it shrinks.
Sorry if this sounds picky, but I felt the need to correct it :S, don't take it the wrong way, I really do love the story :)
| ella-spella chapter 15 . 1/31
i laughed. i cried. i pitied London for being subjected to a bored Sherlock with separation anxiety. i loved it thank you for writing it!
| Dorkchic chapter 15 . 1/26
Loving this story so far and looking forward to any future updates! BTW, during the sentencing of the queen bully you mentioned someone named Athena... Who is that, and did I just completely miss an explanation in a previous chapter?
| Into The Vortex chapter 15 . 1/25
I love this fanfic! it is really well written, keeps the storyline original and easy to follow without being boring as well as keeping the characters in character while giving them good depth. I really enjoyed it, well done!
Got to sleep now though, it's way past midnight!
| Harriverse chapter 15 . 1/21
Oh, no! It's over?
Well, it was quite a ride of ups and downs you posted for us. Thanks for sharing your work and for completing it.
| Alice chapter 15 . 1/14
Loved the story, definitely one of the best. I understand there's no need for a sequel, the wrap was perfect - basically an epilogue really. Amazing!
| exaigon chapter 15 . 1/14
I cant wait for more!
| HarnGin chapter 9 . 1/14
"Abate" means "subside" or "end." I believe the word you wanted to use is "albeit."
| Sun-Tsu Toriden chapter 7 . 1/14
This is a very engaging story, but it would be improved by having a second pair of eyes look over it. There are a few instances where you misspelled words that weren't picked up by spellcheck. One instance is the word 'rigged' when I'm quite certain you meant 'rigid'.
Still though, I'm looking forward to more.
| eirame chapter 15 . 1/14
It is simply fantastic ! I really loved this last chapter : it is interesting and so well written. You pride is not misplaced.
Thank you very much for sharing this work with us, and may you never lack inspiration !
| 96flowers chapter 15 . 1/14
Loved it! Normally I don't read gender swap stories but I loved this! It was perfect!
| mervoparkite chapter 15 . 1/14
I love Stella. I love John and Sherlock. I love how you blended the two worlds. I Love that she chose the Muggle world over magical. I love the whole blessed chapter.
Thank you for this story. I'm sorry this is the end of Stella's story, but understand when it's time to move on.
Thank you for sharing.