Reviews for Disgaea: Nether Chronicles
Espada 4 Jurabi chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
I'm having high hopes for this story and good job on the chapter. I'm a writing critic and I feel like posting reviews on each of you chapter starting with this one:

Review: Okay only one mistake:
"I we're do why don't we introduce our selves." Don't you mean, "Why don't we introduce ourselves?"

Other than that, great chapter and I can't wait for you future projects and I'm interested in the Neither world.
Espada 4 Jurabi chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I'm already interested in this story and as a plus, you've gotten three of my favorites characters. I'm so looking forward to it!