| Reviews for Dream Jump |
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   The Patchwork Rabbit chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 Interesting. Maybe it should be sadder? Oh well, It's fine as is! |
| Antoninsh chapter 2 . 12/27/2013 i cant wait for the next chapters! _ |
| regulusgal chapter 2 . 11/21/2013 It's a really good idea to have Kyoko's life not revolving only around acting. You manage to show that she's also an ordinary girl. A bit surprised to see that the setting is in LA, but never mind. Some grammars need to be fixed here and there. Otherthan that, you've done a good job so far. |
| muchachomomo chapter 2 . 11/3/2013 This is really good. And DAMN KYOKO CAN DUNK?! Hella perfect, I swear. |
| shatto chapter 2 . 11/2/2013 I like this story good job |
| Yuki Urahimi chapter 2 . 11/1/2013 Good morning or evening. One thing i must say. WHY DO YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT POINT. WAAAAAAAAAAA, EVIL EVIL EVIL! me liked the chapter and story o far writ more. adne more and more. k that it for now. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2013 can't wait for the next |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 Good job |
| misao97 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013 Hmmmm i really like it so far! Very nice idea! And it's also nice to see kyoko not obsessed with job! I can't wait to read more! Gambatte |
| CabaretHotSauce chapter 1 . 10/17/2013 That was beautifull and i loved the story and how u added a few things. I can't wait to see the way you will introduce ren/kuon. Criticism wise, hmmm... I would say putting in a few descriptive things would be nice like going into a little bit more detail on her emotions and not skimming over them. Though I've got to say PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON for example once u read this haha |