Reviews for The Walled Garden
Ardina Falconhurst chapter 13 . 6/12/2014
Haha ;) That did the trick! Scratched the itch I had for more of an ending. It was beautifully written like the entire story, great job! And thank you for writing it! :)
Keep up the great work,
Pepper
nomdeplume30 chapter 13 . 4/19/2014
Great story! Love how you filled in blanks without rehashing all the movie bits that I can just watch if I wanted to. Really enjoyed the epilogue, too. Glad you added it. The last line was very poignant. Thanks for sharing!
Mypie chapter 13 . 3/20/2014
What a perfect ending. Sigh.

Yes the Gazebo is what holds their memories.
Ah love the fact thst he wanted M to find out she loved him, even if it broke his heart a bit.
That last paragraph was sad. I'm sure they'll face the future with all their love.
Mypie chapter 12 . 3/20/2014
NO! He's going to marry! Ugh,why, why, ,why!
Ooo there is the question again. Just answer truthfully!
Aarrg no why the interruption?
I feel so sorry fir Maria...sigh.
Oh YES ! He came to his senses!
Mypie chapter 11 . 3/20/2014
I was shocked, she left. Luckily you explained!
And the best part, she came bsck!

Haha loved her description of Georg!
He just straight out asked her if he shouldn't marry! Why didn't he wait gor her reply...afraid?
Mypie chapter 10 . 3/20/2014
Her openness to him is lovely and hopefully it means she thrusts him.

"Most people don't achieve their heart's desire even once. But you ought to try, before it's too late. The devil of it is," he said slowly, "if I thought I could find it again, even knowing what I know now? I'd do it in a heartbeat."

These words, wow, they made me swallow back some tears. Very powerful!

Why did he really give her the key? Yes there is more between them, let's hope they both see it.
Mypie chapter 9 . 3/18/2014
Georg, the gentleman. Or isn't he?! Lol
Doubt he will ever show this garden ro Elsa.

Ooooh he's leaning towards her...
Mypie chapter 8 . 3/10/2014
I can totally picture her watching the statue. Flustered and all. What made him clean up the garden?
O-oh that's what you get when you're curious.
Mypie chapter 7 . 3/10/2014
Love the fact that she 'felt' something after the puppet show.
When he's talking to Elsa. My mind goes bla-bla-bla-bla. Sorry. ; )

Oh he's teasing her! Love it.
BrittanyLS chapter 13 . 3/5/2014
Brilliant ending!
Mypie chapter 6 . 3/5/2014
Glad he came to his senses.
Ha, him mocking her about becoming a nun.
He’s talking to her about his wife, awww.

Love that they feel comfortable in each others presence, hope Maria comes to an understanding what her path in life is.

They really connect! *happy sigh*
Mypie chapter 5 . 3/5/2014
He’s angry! Really angry!

That fight was well, wow! How she told him, speechless. She loves these children as if they are her own. Sigh

Yes, he listened!
Mypie chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
The openness in the conversation between the children and Maria is wonderful.
Why did Elsa have to interrupt this little family moment.

O-oh! She’s in trouble.
FarmerLiz chapter 13 . 3/4/2014
What a pitch perfect epilogue. Thanks so much for writing it.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/4/2014
I'm really happy with the epilogue. I did feel like ending it at the gazebo scene felt a little abrupt, but this is great. Thanks so much for sharing this story.
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