Reviews for Break the Civilized Chains
Guest chapter 15 . 4/9
Does this fic still have a sequel? Ive looked through all of your stories and i havent spotted it, is it still being worked on? I really hope so cause this story is incredible!
StayBlessed chapter 9 . 3/2
While I enjoy this fic, still don't enjoy River's characterization. She defeated like 20 armed Reavers by herself, yet can't kill Santana and his mercs? Guess it's good for the story, but not really keeping to who and what River is.
StayBlessed chapter 3 . 3/2
Why is River acting like such a victim here? Did she not go through the stuff with the alliance, so she has no training? I'm so confused.
StayBlessed chapter 2 . 3/2
Don't really like River's portrayal in this one. Why is she acting so weak, when she can easily kill just about anybody?
MiLa63 chapter 15 . 7/2/2016
This is one of my favorite River/riddick pieces! I love how you changed the movie and how you structured Rivers dialogue! I am so excited for the sequel!
Soffe chapter 15 . 6/21/2016
I hope you will think of writing a follow up?
I would love to read about Their journey :)
shika93 chapter 15 . 11/25/2015
Great story.
shika93 chapter 13 . 11/25/2015
Good chapter.#!
shika93 chapter 12 . 11/25/2015
Good chapter.
shika93 chapter 11 . 11/25/2015
Good chapter .
Samcoo 12 chapter 15 . 6/19/2015
Love this true to character and well within the plot can't wait for the sequel
Cepharim chapter 15 . 4/3/2015
Please tell me there's a sequel in the works.
Aiyobi Uzamaki chapter 15 . 1/27/2015
Is the sequal ready yet
Guest chapter 15 . 11/28/2014
I really enjoyed the story.
Mazoku Tora'inu chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
I'm having some serious trouble seeing River raped by a merc gang. Unless she's tied up 24/7, she'd absolutely destroy them. Especially in a cramped, dark space like a ship.
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