|Reviews for The Legacy|
| R.Peter chapter 69 . 5/26
Sweet chapter. Really miss the moments between Harry and Daphne, glad we had that here!
Look forward to more!
| faltrock chapter 16 . 5/26
Wait didn't you have a sweet embrace in an emotional scene and sibling-like feelings (implied) between Harry and Hermione in the third chapter? I understood that as Hermione actually caring about Harry, much like in canon, as one of her first real friends.
This Hermione however looks like she has not had much maturing in the last 5 years in Hogwarts; she is bossy, controlling, thinking herself better than everyone else, manipulative, impolite... god what a shallow, arrogant, despicable character. I hope for your story's sake that you actually show her developing into a better person later on.
Your ideas about magical theory, how magic really works, and Harry's discovery of being a horcrux early in the story were great building blocks, but I guess reading another 400k words with potential rage-inducing characterisation like this is not my cup of tea.
| hainbane chapter 36 . 5/21
This Harry was so promising. He grew a brain, destroyed the horcruxes and then he failed everything by being a spinless worm. People who can't kill to protect their family or themselves don't deserve to live. A simple matter of natural selection. Kill or die. His inaction and angst over something so simple is really annoying and stupid. Still an interesting story. A bit long and really lacking action but interesting.
| bakuragrey1998 chapter 69 . 5/20
Damaged Goods? What does Daphne think about harry then he is technically damaged goods with the famous scar.
| Richard chapter 69 . 5/20
Awesome, i have read the whole thing in a few weeks or so, cant wait for next chapter.
| AragornII chapter 69 . 5/18
| ulkser chapter 52 . 5/18
long waited, came on chapter 52...it might be odd but I was thinking, when Dumbledore was talking to Minevra, he said he would die soon and writing a lot of stuff on magic to be sent to Harry after he dies. So far absolutely no mention of these. the death of Albus was extremely anti-climating, only mentioned. Given the timeline, we are in Feb now, it is not likely he is still alive. At first I thought, it was a decoy but now we are in Jan and he had said he could barely survive till September so that thought is nothing.
I am just stuck at that. maybe in his writings, Harry can find the breakthrough he was looking for.
| ulkser chapter 48 . 5/18
should I get worried about using guns and such...I didn't like the idea of muggle medicine. also I don't get why Harry cannot use his first or second tactic and has to think something new for all his kill plans. no one can find the evidence so why not repeat it?
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 69 . 5/18
Ok Draco is becoming very dangerous. He needs to be taken care of !
| Wolfman613 chapter 69 . 5/17
Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and enjoyed it a lot.
| Guest chapter 56 . 5/17
I caught the "cookie" connection from when Harry brought her one when Malfoy attacked and Obliviated her.
| Guest chapter 50 . 5/17
Draco honestly scares me; you're brilliant.
| ulkser chapter 40 . 5/17
I didn't get how harry done it. so exiciting. at last! After 5 chapters of waiting, it happened. I liked Walden's musings. very good. thanks, it was worth the wait. however, I am dead curious how it is done.
| ulkser chapter 39 . 5/17
5 chapters in a row...still no progress no action but somehow the story still kept me reading on without a break. may be it is the apprehension of what will come next but I hope something will come next and better soon.
| ulkser chapter 38 . 5/17
4 gigantic chapters and absolutely nothing happened...where is action?