Trop de bavardages inutile et encombrant rendant l'histoire lassant

Jumped to the end after reading the first 35 chapters and I’m really disappointed that Harry is still married to the wretch Daphne. There is no logical universe where Harry has the spine to stand up to Voldemort, but puts up with her nonsense.
The entire premise of Harry sacrificing himself for a bigoted Slytherin who drops words like “moodblood” “blood traitor” and clearly thinks he is a dumb unattractive ignoramus… silly. Painful to read honestly (hence me skipping half the story).
Writing style was decent, however.

Ch 19… Daph is simply a vile person. Totally self-centered. Why are we readers supposed to care about her? Also, I hate watching Harry be such a passive chump punching-bag. I’m ready for the power-up arc already, please!

Since he donated from the Black vault he became head of house, surely he becomes head of house Potter now since the marriage contract is now active.

This ending Part of the chapter makes no sense, why is Harry demanding more money?

He thinks he's going to die, He has a saviour complex, He doesn't care about money, And any reason to annoy Malfoy he does it for fun. So their is no logic to him asking for more money

Why can't he loan her the money with as the Potter family

First action in 350k words and it's a training session, like when are we gonna see all of this against actual enemies? Why use stupid assassination tactics instead of fighting using everything you've said Harry's learned so far? It's like you never heard of the concept of Chekov's gun. You have great grammar but your characters are annoying, you choose the worst possible ways to handle situations and you deprive your readers of the satisfaction of seeing the bad guys actually suffering from their actions. It's so disappointing to read a story for this long and have it just not go anywhere. I'm done.

Ugh, is there ever gonna be any action or is he gonna kill all of them by using some underhanded assassination tactis that are more boring than anything?

All this time waiting for some action and you make it as boring as humanly possible. Why?

How is there no accountability to Snape acting like this? This is way beyond just taking points and saying words.

I hate how Hermione has to know everything. Mind her own business.

I hate Hermione

I very much dislike magical contracts of the betrothal variety, but your writing is so interesting that I can get past it.

This is absolutely amazing. I wish you had more works

I think Harry should never be friends with Harry, her superiority complex is that she always is condescending and doubtful of his ability to do anything. Instead of encouraging him to do better that ensure Harry think himself as worthless who knows nothing without her. If Harry was friend with someone who pushed him toward excelence than consider him beneath their intellect he would actually become something. Afraid of losing friends and he makes himself useless just to remain friends with them. This story has also done the same. Hopefully the friendship break.