|Reviews for The Legacy|
| bugaboo13 chapter 81 . 7/26
Really love tge story and can't wait for chapter 82
| bugaboo13 chapter 29 . 7/19
Reallglove this story and can't wait to see more of it soon
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/17
That is one thing about the Weasleys is they always got their noses into other peoples business. God I hate them in Connon and most fan fictions. Very good so far.
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/15
And now my biggest problem with this story (that could have actually been really good good but failed miserably due to shit character development and boring filler chapters) Daphnie Greengrass. Personally i never hated a character more i think even the bad guys i usually like. I mean i like their characters but obviously not them as a person. Congratulations you created a character that i despise both as a character and even more so as a person. I dont know what you will have to pull out of your ass to make her remotely likeable. There is literally nothing that i can identify myself with in her. You made her into a simple bitch that's selfish egotistical delusional hypocritical cold to everyone like i dont think she is capable of feelings cowardly big headed and bigoted. Literally the only thin she had going for her was looks and now even that is gone so... therefore harry would have a better and more entertaining romantic relationship whit kreatcher than her. I think i would actually rather date kreatcher than her.
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/15
Ok where to start. You are an odd one really. Your writing is quite good and even though the work is long winded you carry the plot... kind of it gets really tedious and boring at times as you have a habit of missing or partially cutting of important bits and wasting time on noyhing basically. Now that maybe necessary sometimes for chcaracter creation exept in your case its not. The characters are bland simple and lack depth. Hermionie is delusional about what the definition of war is. She is also extremely iritating. Harry lacks backbone and requires hhermions and rons aproval before he does anything appart from the contract. And now my bigest
| asingh123 chapter 2 . 7/11
I read this chap and then stopped reading...
Not becoz this is a bad story, in fact in the last chap and even in the start of this chap I quiet liked how Harry was different and not a tantrum throwing kid, instead acting like somebody who just lost his only chance at family... but then this story became boring...
Harry acts like a meek weakling and not somebody who wants the last memory of the godfather he just lost
He concludes himself in his mind that he is going to die swinging... and when he got that book he acts like his reigns are in the hands of his chess master and again, not like somebody who wants the last memory of the Godfather he lost...
Which I could just have read in canon... then I thought why not go ahead a few chaps and look at harry's character there...
n I stumbled onto a landmine... which also brings me to my second peeve...
Daphne Greengrass... You wanted to make her something else than an Ice Queen... Great you made her into an Ice Bitch now...
I mean the "Meek" Harry lingered to chat with her... and the way Daphne treated him...I must say this not far from Ice Queen and you just followed the same mold for an "Imaginative Character"
Recommendation: Try "Grass is always Greener by kb0" for Daphne's character
"Falling down and getting up again only makes stronger."
This is not the Harry that really has that sentiment in him...
| Satoshi-gekkouga chapter 81 . 7/8
I've been following your story for quite a while now and I have finally decided to review. This is by far the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever readit is so good that I believe it should replace the last 2 books in the canon. Keep up the good work. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
| TheMagicIsWithMe chapter 81 . 7/7
Your ideas are very ingenuous and cool! I liked the story. It's a bit long but worth it. Also, you seem to have a habit of putting this phrase "something like that, yes" which is a bit annoying since it appears in almost every chapter and is not needed sometimes. So would appreciate if you refrained from putting it in further chapters. Anyway I loved loved this new Harry. So much better than the helpless Harry from Jkr's books. Also the way you developed Harry and Daphne's relationship was beautiful. Overall I think you've done a brilliant job with the fic. Please update soon!
| Thanasi chapter 48 . 7/5
This story has gotten too boring for me and honestly its dragging to such a painful level... So little has happened in the last 25 chapters. Its just painful to read now. Thanks for the good start and good luck in your future stories!
| Thanasi chapter 47 . 7/5
... why are all these people idiots... they think they will get to be in peace.. they are acting like the ministry are allies or possible friends but they arent... they are completely taken over... FFS your character except harry are morons and harry is letting morons tell him what to do. why did he say he did those killings? Do you really think those weasleys are gonna turn on him. WTF is going on with your story. It started so great.
| Thanasi chapter 43 . 7/5
Ok... lets be honest... this story is just long winded... hes not making any progress on anything. Hermoine is going oh no dont do that Harry... Hes like hey i wanna do that but lets be honest.. hes not making any progress. Theses people are a dime a dozen... and the resistance is doing absolutely shit. Its doing less than shit its getting any of its available fighters away... i guess they are giving up and just going on a suicide run at this point.
| Thanasi chapter 39 . 7/5
Honestly, this Daphne is a bitch. I dont like her very much... Malfoy has gone nuts. And we have been stuck in this stupid fucking house for like a bajillion chapters. I can now sympathize with Sirius from the books and Im not even living in the damn'd house.
| Terahlyanwe chapter 81 . 7/4
The slow burn DG/HP is interesting and well done. Also love the intricate theories of magic. And Pansy. Oh, that girl's brain. Twisty, deluded place.
| Hunter9229 chapter 25 . 7/4
| Emeraldfireblade chapter 52 . 7/1
A storm, eh? More like the sickly green sky preceding a tornado, lol. Either way, the kiss was a welcome milestone.
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