Reviews for A Simple Request
Dark eyes chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I love it u should update
NoahFan4Ever chapter 1 . 11/23/2013


I loved this story, especially the ending where Mike was just asking for someone to help him. It was really touching. There was, however, one thing I hated: IT's over! Nooooooooo... But still, this is amazing and I hope you will write a continuation of this_ I will definitely read it! :)
sunshineg9 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Is it wrong if I luaghed in delight at the ending?
RabuneHino chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Amazing writing. You should really go in depth with this. Like, really go into Mal and Duncan's past together.
Pro. Owlfeather chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Normally, I like longer fics, but this is really good- even though it's short.

But, I feel that there are some details, some explaining that's missing.
Starlight-blood-flower chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
O.O awesome
Starryoak chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Oh. My. God.
Please don't leave it here, like, maybe a little story about Duncan's first day at Juvy and the encounter with Mal? I mean, you don't have to, but I'm letting you know you would have me faving it and probably others.
Ritsu Kaiori chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Oh wow! I like!
FanficLoverForever135 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
WOW... That was deep. It was a beautiful way of showing us the type of torment poor Mike suffered at Mal's hands. This was really good, I would,it mind reading another if you were so kind as to write one. Thanks, and keep up the good work.