|Reviews for Aerial Choreography|
| Sexy Cow chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
so...this...story was nice it just I seen you bash people for doing things like this so I guess its ok for you to do it wow that make a lot of sense...Don't give me wrong I like your stories but I don't like you as a person
| TheDarkThief chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Lol.I've seen you bash other stories for this type of stuff but obviously it's okay for you to do it though,right? Hypocrite.
| josh chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
dude seriously its too early for steven to be a dad plus i don't think he even know how it works but hey its your story not mine so if you want to live in a fantasy world i recommend you get some serious help
| Cornonjacob chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
This reminds me of Steven and Amethyst: The Love that Transcends the Doors of Inanity but it didn't make me laugh in the slightest.
| Starcharter- 75 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
(Again. Because I can't technically review it again.)
Voice: THIS IS SPINAL TAP!
Star: What are you doing?
Voice: Well, she said they'd take it up to eleven. So, as I was saying... THIS IS SPINAL TA-
Star: Will you shut up?!
Voice: Aww, calm down, it's not like someone has never fall in love with someone else because of a story revolving around child molestation that's on a website dedicated to copyright infringement. Dude, it happens.
Star: Wait, how do you know all of this?
Voice: Uh... Gem intuition!
Voice: Also, why does nobody care about a forest fire?! Remember, Amity-
Voice: Amethyst. Remember, Amethyst, only YOU can prevent forest fires!
Star: She's a bunch of words on an electronic screen. I don't think she can hear you.
Voice: Eh, you're probably right. So... what do you wanna do now?
Star: Why don't we get back to our homework? You know, the homework that I stopped doing to leave this review?
Voice: Oh yeah.
I know I already left two reviews for this story, a good one and a bad one. I just wanted to give it a good send-off. Even if it's not good, it's still a milestone for Steven Universe- and a milestone for us.
| the argonian ice king chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
wtf, the last part in your summary kind of implied child molestation, just wanted to point that out
| Sfucguc chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
This escalated to the point of madness
| blackwood108 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Hey starcharter screw off. This is a good story. I hate people who tear others ideas down. So beat it
| Starcharter-75 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
(Posted as a guest to give you the option of whether or not to put this on the review page.) I have decided to revoke my previous review of this story. My feelings for it have diminished greatly since my initial read-through. Listen Voltalia, you have been a wonderful friend to me and have given me a Rose Quartz story to read (she is my favorite SU character), but I am about to bash this story in such a way as not yet seen.
The thing is, Voltalia, most stories in the archive are art. But this, and I will be blatant about this, this... is pornography. Not so much as there is in Inanity, but it is pornography none the less. And by definition, pornography has no artistic value to it; it's sex. And this is nothing but it. I have to wonder if its a good idea for you to watch so much Superjail as you watch, because, once again, this is pornography. Not art.
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, but this story deserves it. I'm truly sorry.
| Tigers4ever chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Okay, so far, good story. Is their a chapter two?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
so i gess she need to stay in bed
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
| Troi chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
| Derp chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Very Good story i loved it! :) and your one of the only people who do steven x amethyst [which i respect] (and i found this by looking up steven x amethyst) but here are some things that need improvement. First of all amethyst gets pregnant just from making out with steven but without ever coming into sexual contact with eachother. second it needed more story to it then that, it had a great begging to a series [except for the pregnaut part] I hope to see more steven x amethyst in the future! (O) keep it up! ;)
| cartoon fan 1 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
OH MY GLOB!