|Reviews for The Valley|
| Lokidaughter13 chapter 20 . 4/11
Since Belle is there I know he'll be will slap sense into him before anything too bad can happen.
| Lokidaughter13 chapter 13 . 4/7
Please dont make Belle be like Milah.
| Elon chapter 50 . 3/20
I love your story. I love that they all got their happy ending here! Keep it up and thanks for sharing this
| Electricboa chapter 50 . 12/18/2014
This has to be one of the best Once Upon a Time stories I've read to date. I absolutely love the concept. Having Belle there instead of Milah really felt so much better when it came to the part where Rumpelstiltskin cripples himself. She takes it so much better than Milah, and it felt very much in character. I also liked that you made Maurice a loved character. It's not something I often see. I think this is the only story I've read where he and Rumpelstiltskin are on good terms.
The spiral down into darkness was done very well, and I especially liked the prices of magic. Having Maurice killed over gold was prosaic and still managed to show the insidiousness of magic. I found myself liking the Baelfire/Moraine pairing and was a little sad to see they don't make it back to the Enchanted Forest. I really did feel sorry for the two of them realizing their feelings only after it was too late.
There's so much I liked about the story that I'm finding it difficult to pin down specifics. The characters were all dynamic and developed very well over the course of the story. I thought the way you interwove the scenes from the official canon, like Robin Hood stealing the wand, kept it nice and parallel to the series. All in all, a great work. Keep up the excellent writing.
| orthankg1 chapter 50 . 12/5/2014
Very nice indeed.
| Lovesbugsalot chapter 50 . 11/22/2014
I just now got a chance to finish this, and it is truly wonderful. You are an excellent writer and this story was a special type of thrilling. It, and you, is/are amazing.
| OUATWhoLock chapter 50 . 11/19/2014
This is beautiful. Can it be canon? I want it to be. haha.
in my top 5 favorite stories for sure. :D
| OUATWhoLock chapter 25 . 11/18/2014
:( You had to kill off the ONE Maurice I liked. Darn.
| Twyla Mercedes chapter 50 . 11/14/2014
Nice conclusion (always a little sad when you come to the end of things). Look forward to your next effort.
| AccountDeactivated2015 chapter 50 . 11/13/2014
That was an interesting end. I liked it.
| Erik'sTrueAngel chapter 50 . 11/9/2014
So sad to see this end but what an incredible story! I loved how you had them find Bae with the Darlings. That was something I wished the show expanded on and explored, but it's clear they will all stay in touch and I like that. Also, I'm glad Rumple had the chance to tell Bae the truth about the bean and the portal. Something else I wished had happened on the show. So a lot of my wishes came true with this AU! Thank you so much for sharing this story and I will definitely keep a lookout for more of your stories.
| redangel2463 chapter 50 . 11/8/2014
A perfect ending to such an amazing fic. Great Job!
Keep Up The Awesomeness XD!
| Grace5231973 chapter 50 . 11/8/2014
I am sorry to see it end but I loved every minute of it! I enjoy reading your stories! Take all the time you need, your stories are worth the wait!
| WikiSorcerer chapter 50 . 11/7/2014
I highly doubt Regina would take this sitting down so easily. Maybe Storybrooke appears out of nowhere in the English countryside and our Gold family investigate, and it is up to them to find out how Regina did it.
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 50 . 11/7/2014
I can't believe it's over I've been following it for so long !