Reviews for Incredible
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Hi Missy, i absolutley love this story! I read it all in one night. You are a genius and i can't wait for the next chapter, make it good! draco and harry are a sweet ass couple *lol* n' i just can't wait for chapter 9. don't worry about finding someone to beta chapter nine, i really am dying inside to find out what happens next! Xx
The True-Wolf chapter 9 . 12/10/2013
Please write more soon I am dying to know what happens. (Not literally but I think you understand) best story I have read in a while :)
River Song the Good Witch chapter 8 . 12/4/2013
*lol* I don't see why Draco has to KEEP his promise to marry Astoria. He didn't swear it on his magic or sign a magically binding contract or anything that will inforce him to keep his promise to marry the girl against his will. Now that he has Narcissa's 'permission' to save Harry, why doesn't he and Harry just simply RUN AWAY once they get Harry's cure? Fake their deaths or something if they have to, go get married as planned, and live off of Harry's own inheiritance for the rest of their days, until they become twenty and may or may not come back. *lol* or better yet, why don't they just ELOPE while they are away and once Harry is cured, come back and show off their wedding bands to Narcissa and the Greengrasses and say their won't be a wedding ever between Draco and Astoria. *lol*

Though I think I liked the old version of this chapter. At least Narcissa was actually SAD and REMORSEFUL about having to break her sons heart, especially after the now missing 'I hate you' line he gave her. *lol*
Nathy22 chapter 8 . 12/2/2013
Very good chapter, very tense. Severus so hinders the life of this couple. He should not interfere. I'll keep watching ...
emily h chapter 8 . 12/2/2013
OMG harry and draco got engaged. draco is so sweet! 3 but then narcissa broke them up? heartbreakingggg omg. i cn't wait for chapter nine, this should be...interesting. you are very good writer. breaking draco and harry up doesn't rlly seem like something narcissa would do but you said that you have a reason for it s i understand. i love esther the is very intresting charcter and sounds vry pretty. wait so scorpius from draco's dream is not harrys son? does that mean that draco cheats on him or has baby with astoria? i am sorry for bad spelling and grammar im typing this on m ohone. love it! keep writing
Nathy22 chapter 7 . 12/1/2013
Very good chapter, I'm loving these dreams, I'll keep watching ...
Nathy22 chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
Loved the chapter, Harry suffers a lot, I'll keep watching ...
Nathy22 chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
Loved the chapter, Draco is very romantic, I'll keep watching ...
Nathy22 chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
Very good chapter, I love this couple, I'll keep watching ...
Nathy22 chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
Very good chapter, Harry has a low self esteem, keep writing ...
Nathy22 chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
Very good chapter, keep writing ...
Nathy22 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Very good first chapter, keep writing ...
paili-chan chapter 3 . 11/30/2013
Wait isn't there a LOT missing from Harry's torture scene. Like when Lucious was telling Harry that he was glad Harry was finally awake, but with no explaination of exacty what Lucious did to torture Harry, it goes STRAIGHT to Lucious grabbing Draco and pinning his arms behind his back and forcing him to watch while Harry was being tortured. Though if Lucious was using HIS arms to keep Draco immobile, how was he 'torturing' Harry if he was focusing on preventing Draco from stopping him? *lol*

Though WHY did Harry let himself be 'talked' into going back to the Dursleys for Christmas? He's 18 and legally doesn't have to go back there if he doest want to no matter what anybody says. Or better yet if he HAS to go back there, why doesn't he stop the abuse now? He's 18, and now legall a whole year older past the legal adult age of 17 in the magical world.

He's no longer a minor, and he should start pointing out to the Dursleys that there is NOTHING stopping him from hexing them all to hell and back if choses to if they don't leave him alone. There will be no more ministry owls delivering warning letters threatening to expel him and get his wand snapped for using magic outside of school.

He should GLEEFULLY point all this out to them while pointing his wand at them threateningly and even toss around a few 'harmless' spells just to prove what he says is true, and tell them that if they don't leave him alone there would be hell to pay, because he 17 years of abuse and neglect to heap back on them with the help of his wand. *lol*
Sakura Lisel chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
Aw... no fair! I just found this cool story last night, and its already being rewritten just when its getting good? *pouts*
Sakura Lisel chapter 8 . 11/28/2013
If I were Draco he should have told Narcissa where she can shove her 'you need a respectable woman who can provide you with a heir'. Even though Draco promised Eshter that he wouldn't tell ANYONE but Harry about her or their future kids, can't he LIE and say that he and Harry have been doing 'research' on potions or spells that would INSURE that the whole 'heir issue wouldn't be a problem, because they've discovered a magical way to make men pregnant or something and that one of them would be carrying the babies? If the problem Narcissa is having is the need for an heir as the reason why she's blackmailing Draco into marrying Astoria in order to save Harry, then he should tell her that he and Harry are trying to find a way to have that covered without outright telling her about Eshter and her brothers. Though if Eshter really is the oldest of the kids, guess Draco kept his promise of NOT having kids with Astoria even though he has a son named Scorpius as well. *lol*

Wait but wasn't Eshter almost practically saying that either Harry or himself were already pregnant when she kept saying the she would cease to exist if Harry died? Or haven't Harry and Draco had sex yet in the last couple of months in order for one of them to be pregnant already with Eshter who's simply waiting in the underworld to be born to them? *lol*
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