Reviews for If At First You Don't Succeed
Darkanny chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
that was the most impressive list of dick names i've ever ever read and this is great in every sense
Maejirase chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Of course these two would be bickering before having sex. I couldn't imagine them not. XD
nivael chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Ahahahahaahahaaa... XD
Weapon of ass destruction! Ahahaahaha... i cannot.. i .. its too much!
I laughed so hard! Great!
Artemis Fortune chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Realistic sex scene in a fanfiction? What is this witchcraft? ;)
Very funny. Jack is just a little tease, isn't he? But to be fair I wouldn't go running for Bunny's huge manpole right away either!
jackmyfrost chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
I'm more surprised that Jack didn't notice that bunnies bear their dingleberries ABOVE their Weapons of Ass Destruction. HOHO.
lilypadXXdramione chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
OMG. so many lols
Moongoddess1387 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Thank u! Thank u! Thank u! Finally someone did it. A realistic take on a first time. Love the quote and I must say I've never seen so many synonyms for the word penis. Bravo