|Reviews for Second Mouse|
| tayababy chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
Well, that was certainly an entertaining ride, and I loved the pub scene in the end. well done!
| Alpha Flyer chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
For CrlkSeasons: Nothing like crack science, huh?
Sorry. I HAD to say that at some point. ;-)
| CrlkSeasons chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
After the action, the inevitable return to the machinations of the political dance.
Very satisfying pairings for this cool down chapter. Lots of potential for future interactions on many levels of the two agencies.
Great fun with the word play and the gentle pokes at politics and culture, as well as the foreshadowing of the relationship to come.
"... the direct provocation of percussive explosive charges having been delivered into the cracks created by fracturing of the rock stratum with a binary explosive." I have to say - try saying that ten times fast!
| weemcg33 chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
This story was brilliant! I loved all the references to the Bond film names. Nice touch :)
I would also love to see Nick Fury and M in a room together, that would be such a laugh.
But your writing of both lint and James was spot on, I feel like going and watching some Bond films now and wishing that Jeremy Renner was in them lol
Awesome story! By an awesome author *winks*
| Photogirl1890 chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
I like the fire extinguishing arrows from Q! This was great from start to finish: the humour, the action, the title. Warping time worked out well.
| Mascota chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
You are an absolutly wonderful writer, incredible characters development, details are a gift to our mind. Your story blow out mi head. Thank you!
| Qweb chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
And the second mouse gets the cheese. Great last line.
Quantum of solace was a stretch.
Thanks for the story.
| TheNaggingCube chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
hahahah, I knew it just forgot the time line note in the A/N.
Lovely job throughout.
hahahah so it is Q that gave Clint the weapon to hack the computer. I LOVE IT.
I really enjoyed Hawkeye and 007s bonding time (yes pun intended).
| DBhawkguy30 chapter 7 . 11/8/2013
This chapter was awesome! I had a stupid grin on my face when you wrote, smart people, those Scots. LOL we totally are! haha
Lots of action in this chapter, think this would make a great movie :) and the mentions of Bond film names and of the god of thunder (Thor) made me smile.
Great work, can't wait for more!
And also, bad, bad Natasha. Can't wait for more run ins with her and Clint *wink*wink*
| tayababy chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
Oh, ejection seats, the Black Widow, assassins, explosions and volcanoes, Oh My!
| memo bonafide chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
Couldn't help but laugh at the last line of this chapter, which is wonderful by so many way: tension, action, car race, humor... thank so much!
| CrlkSeasons chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
Gloves off, full of action, a fun ride all the way.
| Qweb chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
Loved the way you worked in Bond titles - Golden Eye, Die Another Day etc.
| Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
well! Im gussing that this is actually going to be a bit longer, that's good...
l;ike all the Bond references and all, Im suspecting you did them earlier but this is when I caught them really.
but! I must say, every car crashing right near afterwords is fun!
and it was a reliable car too...
anyway, good bit about the insurance there, as well as Barton wanting to push the shiny red button, because COME ON we ALL want to push shiny red buttons.
still Natasha is going to be in Trou-ble with people for accepting proof of kill without verifying it, so now SHE is going to get caught up right in all of this mess!
but yikes hydra just makes some MESSES, god is that just a pain.
M was fun with her outlook, and Money penny and Coulson are fun as well!
still, did the idiot even get the dimonds he was looking for?
and oh yeah Stark still doenst know that things are being sold out form under him, and others are assuming that hes aware.. yikes.
Natashas defensiveness over everything was nice, shes still a raw nerve right now in a lot of ways, which is fun right?
still her hunting Clint, as well as dodging people that might be a tad pissed, bond still with him having to hunt this fool, well it IS a mess aint it?
like the obligatory car chase as well as the injuries of everyone. that's going to be a mess...
still, the aftermath report of this all should be fun.
| Hawaiichick chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
Ha...well the cat is out of the bag with Natasha...well at least in terms of who she works for (which is herself). I love those little tiny hints of interest between Clint and Natasha. Just nice little things that remind me that much more is to come between those two. :) (Even if Bond had her first.) And nice team work between James and Clint.