Reviews for Apology
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Still an excellent story.
Lord Destroyer chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Nice...though I think Gemini(Geminine) is supposed to be sixteen, not nineteen. The one who is the age of nineteen is Shinjiro. I could be wrong, but check the game to be sure just in case...
Drake the Neko chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I have nothing to critique. Well done.

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James Birdsong chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Excellent. Cute.