Reviews for What We Choose
rational chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
This was so sweet. God, I wish Emma would have reacted more like this instead of running away.
Klxroline-dreams chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
tersaseda chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Gah, so so soooooooooooooo beautiful. Just...beautiful. Her vulnerability and hesitancy and attraction and hope all dovetail perfectly. Favorite parts:

"Emma thinks he'll let her, it's terrifying but she thinks he'll hold on just as tight." I think so, too!

"And he's looking at her like she's important, not because of her parents' True Love or some prophecy about a Savior, but Emma the orphan, the lost and lonely." I am so glad you brought this out for bugs me that people, even her own parents, can't see her beyond those two facets...all they see (or at least before the Lost Girl episode) was the expectation of their child and how she fit into their Enchanted Forest life. But Killian can see the sum of all the parts of her, and loves her for all that she is. Well, I say love but we honestly don't know yet...but I suspect strong, strong feelings.

Thank you for sharing your talent!
Willofthewisp chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Such a wonderful companion piece to the one I just reviewed. Emma's head is, against all odds, a fun place to go and you have her voice down. This was beautiful.
Starlight000 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
icearrows1200 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This was seriously just so, so great. I look all over the place for a good Captain Swan fic, but to no avail. This was fantastic in that every last word was perfect for Emma's desperate and conflicted thoughts.
She found solace in Hook because he is always there for her, always boosting her confidence and helping her, when her subconscious can only remember that Neal was not there for her.
In all honesty I hope that this is exactly how it goes in next week's episode. I hope to read more by you, as you are a fantastic and descriptive writer. Keep it up!
Leo 'Vortex' Thawne chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
omg loved every moment of this. please get to work on the next chapter soon!
Lisa1972 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
oh that's excellent!
alexandra.sarafolean chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Loved it!
Gaviotica31 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
OMG *sobs* this was perfect! Loved it
loveimagination18 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
tsuki chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
There has been a lot of stories about this kiss but i can certainly say this is the best by far! Awesome work thanks !
Angels-heart1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Loved it! So sweet.
Phoenix-021 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Oh my God, this is just so beautiful...I read many first kiss scenarios, but yours is one of the best :)
onetreefan chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
so cute!
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