Reviews for What She Deserves
bonz245 chapter 18 . 4/22
This story is so good..thanks.
Kni Nut chapter 18 . 4/22
My heart is still breaking for both of them.
I'm happy they are starting to mend their own.
NanStew chapter 18 . 4/22
Thanks for the A/N. I was getting a little worried about that.
slc6548 chapter 18 . 4/21
Excellent chapter!
luvstwilight4ever chapter 18 . 4/21
Great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/19
Edward?
jansails chapter 18 . 4/20
They're so heartbreaking.
Bella did what she needed to do for herself, but it broke Edward in the process.
jansails/jan2
Guest chapter 18 . 4/18
I hope Edward was sober enough to use a condom! He better have checked up with the skank to make sure she wasn't pregnant.

I hope Bella has her own one night stand. Edward has been with Lauren, and now another woman. It's time for Bella to get some.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/18
Everyone needs therapy, it really cleanses your thoughts and allows you to not bottle it all up. Good writing, lovely story structure. Wow, can't wait to see who it is. I'm glad Edward has the decency to tell Bella that but they are no longer together, and I mean... he kind of is a fuck up right now. He's a complex mess, I guess. I hope he sorts himself out, as on the other hand, Bella seems to be coping much better than him and she's the one who had the kid. Anyway, I wouldn't mind see Bella get into a relationship. Not in a 'get back at you' way to Edward but just maybe having a male friend could help her heal and maybe finding companionship and a bit of love will inspire her down the road. This is a potentially good thing, while Edward's healing and getting therapy. He needs to mature a lot more and perhaps other males can allow Bella to see the intellectual and mature level she sits on and who she'd get along better with. I'm realizing this is all coming out rather harsh but it is the brutal truth I guess. Can't wait for more, keep up the excellent work.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/18
ummmm sorry, but if Bella is not ready to have a relationship with Edward, the guy she loves...how is she ready to move on with another guy? They might not technically be together, but they are not over, there is no closure. I hope Bella tries to date this other guy, but realizes it is not right...and please dont make her have sex with this guy. It would be disgusting, and i truly believe she is far from being ready to start having sex again after what happened. Do not over complicate things, not every line in a story has to be painful. We understand the pain enough, unnecessarily adding more to it wont serve any purpose.
SandytheSandstorm chapter 18 . 4/20
Realy painful to get through. I know its for the best and couldnt have gone any other way but this way.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/18
As much as I hate Edward right now I can't say he's completely at blame. Bella ran away. She just abandoned him with his pain. She's far away and living life so that's all that matters to her. Him sleeping with some girl because he's depressed and drunk is disgusting, but her leaving him all alone is worse.
SLKerouac chapter 18 . 4/19
Bella gets a text from Edward wishing her a Happy Birthday. Bella felt there was more but that was the end of the text. Bella remembered when she told Edward that she was not going back. He was upset. Bella explained why she couldn't be there right now. Edward told her that he needed her but Bella had made up her mind. Rose and Alice had packed up her stuff and shipped it back to Washington. Bella was seeing a therapist which is helping her a lot. To deal with Edward and Layla. About her life and what she wants. Bella was healing. When Bella talked with Edward she told him to go see someone even if it was Diane at the agency. Alice had told Bella that Edward was drinking a lot. There was a call from Edward. He was crying and sick. He missed Bella so much. He missed Layla too. He thought that everything happening to him was punishment. Bella talked with him. Told him that he had to stop with the guilt. He also had to stop drinking. He promised to talk with someone. Later that day Bella walked into the apartment and was surprised by a party. Angela had someone there that she wanted Bella to meet. Who was that? How is Edward doing now in school? Will he come to see Bella? Will something happen that makes Bella pull away from Edward? Will Edward get himself together to get Bella back in his life? How long will it take? Does Bella want to be with Edward? Is he her only true love? Next chapter!
CassandraLowery chapter 18 . 4/19
Wow-this story is just heartbreaking. I love it!

(Why do I love angst? Does it make me feel better that other people's lives (even those of fictional characters) are more screwed up than mine?)

I am really enjoying this story, so thank you for writing it! When we first started, I thought that the "she" in the title was Bella, but now we know it refers to Layla-or perhaps to both. ;)

I admire your ability to go from the hilarity of the "broken ass" in "Plowed" to the angst here, you versatile writer, you!

Have a lovely Eastertide!

Love,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 18 . 4/19
YOu handled all that very well. So many difficult decisions for these two but very realistic and mature reasoning by Bella. I'm so happy you didn't have Bella have a complete melt down when Edward confessed his lapse. It seems a totally understandable response from a heartbroken, drunk guy who's desperate to feel something, anything other than pain and regret.
No doubt you will have the bat shit crazy loons flame you for daring to let your characters behave in a human capacity, so I hope you're wearing your flack jacket. Lol.
Bloody good for you. I'm wondering if Bella's surprise guest is our boy, or a new character.
Thanks for the update .
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