|Reviews for What She Deserves|
| liatb01 chapter 22 . 9/27
Beautiful story, cried my eyes out.
| annne85 chapter 1 . 9/9
What a beautiful story! Very realistic ( is that a word? I'm from Holland) and sad but I loved it. I read this while breastfeading my babygirl at night so I cried a lot because this Bella couldn't be with her babygirl..
| beegurl13 chapter 22 . 9/2
Oh my goodness. I read this whole story today and oh, my heart. :) I have several family members and friends whose lives have been affected by adoption and this story made me love them all a little bit more. You had me crying through the entire second half, and I loved it. Beautiful story. You did an amazing job with it. :)
| TheGreenPanther chapter 22 . 8/3
Such a beautiful story.
| pauleen chapter 22 . 8/1
This one of the best family/ real life stories I've read in twifanfic. I like that although it was a happy ending, it was a realistic ending. Layla's questions about keeping the her newborn brother, edward and bellas honeymoon being interpreted by a crying baby.
I really enjoyed the very sad in between to the highs of this story. Thanks for writing and sharing this story.
| movieandbookgirl chapter 22 . 7/23
| agoogoo chapter 13 . 7/23
*breaks down* I've been feeling a perpetual ache in my chest since chapter 2 (or is it 3).
This is good writing bruh
| jk chapter 9 . 7/2
if nothing happened with lauran then why did Edward go and get tested? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
| jk chapter 5 . 7/2
Edward just told bella that he wouldn't do "something" like that that something being lauran...but didn't rose JUST Tell bella that lauran was with Edward just a week ago? why didn't bella say anything about that?
| Denny52 chapter 22 . 5/16
Just read this for the second time and loved it all over again. Beautiful story. Beautifully written.
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/25
I avoid angst stories but decided to try this one since I've loved some of your others. I cried so much but loved it. Beautiful story.
| Stumbleine44 chapter 22 . 4/13
My god, never cried this much with a story before.
Despite wishing that eventually Layla would return to them, I too went through this journey with these two and somehow understood the decision. It's like I felt their pain. So silly right? But I guess that's what makes you such a great writer. Heartbreaking and beautiful story.
| Ivy Pattinson chapter 22 . 3/15
Such a beautiful story. I couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing it with us!
| renewagain chapter 22 . 3/14
this was such a wonderful story! and I enjoyed it the second time Around just as much. you did an amazing job with their story, it felt real and heartbreaking and so happy at the same time.
| renewagain chapter 20 . 3/14
aaaaaawwwwww. they are making up.