Reviews for What She Deserves
harperpitt chapter 22 . 8/20
Thank you for this beautiful story!
harperpitt chapter 13 . 8/19
Wow, the angst level is high! Great story!
twidorkxx16 chapter 22 . 7/28
God, I cried so much through this. Frustration, sadness, happiness, pain. Beautiful story and it just shows the reality of some. I'm happy they get a happy ending. Much love.
Bevey99 chapter 22 . 10/5/2018
Surprised Bella didn't bust out crying. I think I held my breath while Layla was talking about taking her brother home. Perfect. Such a wonderful powerful story. Thanks for writing and sharing w/ us.
Bevey99 chapter 21 . 10/5/2018
Oh thank god.
Bevey99 chapter 20 . 10/5/2018
Well, now i'm crying. Such a beautiful story.
Bevey99 chapter 19 . 10/5/2018
Well that had to be hard. I think a clean break would have been better.
Bevey99 chapter 18 . 10/5/2018
She stayed, I can see why he would start drinking. Her point were valid but still...
His ONS was expected, poor man. He hasn't moved on as well as she has.
Bevey99 chapter 16 . 10/5/2018
He's been so sweet to her. He's seems to be in as much pain as her.
Bevey99 chapter 15 . 10/5/2018
Heartbreaking. Such anguish.
Bevey99 chapter 14 . 10/5/2018
So so sad. Poor kids. That's really brave of them to go through almost a full term pregnancy then poof there's nothing to show for it. Giving up a baby must be like having one die.
Emotional chapter.
Bevey99 chapter 13 . 10/5/2018
So sad. But happy times for Carlisle and Esme.
Bevey99 chapter 11 . 10/5/2018
He has so many mistakes to atone for, but he loves her. However, love is not a cureall.
Bevey99 chapter 9 . 10/5/2018
Well the light bulb is starting to get brighter for E.
Bevey99 chapter 8 . 10/5/2018
This is heartbreaking. He can't give HER what she needs. He f-d up the relationship.
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