|Reviews for What She Deserves|
| harperpitt chapter 22 . 8/20
Thank you for this beautiful story!
| harperpitt chapter 13 . 8/19
Wow, the angst level is high! Great story!
| twidorkxx16 chapter 22 . 7/28
God, I cried so much through this. Frustration, sadness, happiness, pain. Beautiful story and it just shows the reality of some. I'm happy they get a happy ending. Much love.
| Bevey99 chapter 22 . 10/5/2018
Surprised Bella didn't bust out crying. I think I held my breath while Layla was talking about taking her brother home. Perfect. Such a wonderful powerful story. Thanks for writing and sharing w/ us.
| Bevey99 chapter 21 . 10/5/2018
Oh thank god.
| Bevey99 chapter 20 . 10/5/2018
Well, now i'm crying. Such a beautiful story.
| Bevey99 chapter 19 . 10/5/2018
Well that had to be hard. I think a clean break would have been better.
| Bevey99 chapter 18 . 10/5/2018
She stayed, I can see why he would start drinking. Her point were valid but still...
His ONS was expected, poor man. He hasn't moved on as well as she has.
| Bevey99 chapter 16 . 10/5/2018
He's been so sweet to her. He's seems to be in as much pain as her.
| Bevey99 chapter 15 . 10/5/2018
Heartbreaking. Such anguish.
| Bevey99 chapter 14 . 10/5/2018
So so sad. Poor kids. That's really brave of them to go through almost a full term pregnancy then poof there's nothing to show for it. Giving up a baby must be like having one die.
| Bevey99 chapter 13 . 10/5/2018
So sad. But happy times for Carlisle and Esme.
| Bevey99 chapter 11 . 10/5/2018
He has so many mistakes to atone for, but he loves her. However, love is not a cureall.
| Bevey99 chapter 9 . 10/5/2018
Well the light bulb is starting to get brighter for E.
| Bevey99 chapter 8 . 10/5/2018
This is heartbreaking. He can't give HER what she needs. He f-d up the relationship.