|Reviews for What She Deserves|
| bonz245 chapter 16 . 7h ago
That couldn't have been easy on either one of them..it wasn't easy for me...good chapter..thanks.
| LAL69 chapter 16 . 3/14
I hope he Dad can talk her out of her crazy ,foggy, heartbroken,loving,and brave head and she does go back. That emptiness is the hardest to deal with. Every time I look into my son eyes, I see his brother and wonder what he would be like today. Would he be like his brother, would he have red hair, would he be like me or his dad, would he be as smart as his bother and I know he is loved. I know in my heart is with his grandpa and they are fishing and my dad's buddy (his cat) Charlie has come to sit with him and my son as well. I can only share all this because I have had help coping with my loss, so please if you are reading this and the emptiness is still got you in its grip, please ,please seek help.
| Robfans chapter 16 . 3/12
so sad hoping it will not break them apart
| Robfans chapter 15 . 3/12
its breaking my heart but its for the best for the baby and for Bella and Edward
| roxnroll chapter 16 . 3/13
Wow...that was heavy! Great chapter...sounds like she's suffering from PPD along with everything else.
Can't wait for more!
| CAngell chapter 16 . 3/13
I am going to get a hug from the hubby after I post this. I am shredded- in a good way.
| ipsita chau chapter 16 . 3/13
Oh dear, It's been a while that I read a story struggling through at last couldn't hold it back any touched by it ,thank tell us they'll get their HEA.
| Hadley Hemingway chapter 16 . 3/12
*cries all the tears* this update was so painful and I feel for both of them so much. You are doing a great job with this difficult story, sweet girl. xo
| SLKerouac chapter 16 . 3/12
After getting home Bella just wants to be in bed and sleep. Edward is there with her. Holding her. He spends all his time with her. Alice comes in and sees that something happened. Edward tells Alice to let Bella sleep. He takes her outside the bedroom and tells her about having the baby. She was upset that he did not call but Edward explained how hard it would have been. It was hard enough for Bella. She left to make dinner. Then Edward heard Rose. she came in and hugged Bella and whispered something to her. Bella was not eating and just sleeping. Edward helped Bella and even changed her dressing. One day while Edward was there studying Bella sat up and told him that she wanted to go home. Edward told her that she was but Bella wanted to go back to her Dad in Washington. Now it was getting her there safely. Bella got a airplane ticket. Edward took her to the airport. It was hard for Edward to let her go. He loved her and told her that. That he wanted to take care of her. Bella was so sad. She did not know what she wanted. She wanted her daughter. She wanted to finish school. She wanted Layla to have a wonderful life with Esme and Carlisle. She wanted to be with Edward. She wanted to get away from him. Edward thought that maybe if she was with her Dad she would get better. He was going home to his mother. He wanted to take her with him but things happened. Edward made Bella promise that she would come back in January. Does Edward call Bella during her time in Washington? Does Bella come back in January? Will Bella want to see the pictures that Esme is sending Edward of Layla? What will Bella's father do or say when she comes home? Will Edward go to Washington to see Bella? Will he tell her that he wants her in his life? That she is the only one that he wants? What will Rosalie and Alice do to get Bella back in school? Will they all go to get Bella and bring her back? Will she want to go back to school there with the memories? Keep writing!
| krzpepper chapter 16 . 3/12
Oh dear, she's not coming back, is she?
| 3kdz4me chapter 15 . 3/12
You're killing me! You writing has reached out and grabbed my heart!
| 3kdz4me chapter 14 . 3/12
Oh crap! You're making me cry!
| Twiant chapter 16 . 3/12
I feel for them both, Maybe this time away will help Bella figure out her next step. Thanks for the update :)
| Realluv chapter 16 . 3/12
Wow, another hard chapter to read. Hope she does come back to Edward and doesn't try to hide in Washington.
| rubyblue9696 chapter 16 . 3/12
*ugh*...um...*ugh*...another very well written chapter, author...bravo...*crosses fingers for these two*