Nice job so far. This is awesome.

I really like your story, it is well written and engaging. I just wanted to let you know Ithe doctor on call for obstetrics is usually at the hospital all the time. The doctors on call that has to be called in to the hospital are mainly eye doctor and ear nose and throat and sometimes psychiatrists. It took me personally a bit out of the story. I work as a doctor. But still your story is among my top 10 favourite Harry Potter fanfiction!

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hey just off the bat u got a few idioms wrong. at keiths time it would have been O-Levels, not A-levels. also we don’t have homeroom in the uk. and its not first year, its reception, then year one, year two, so on until year 6 at 11. year 7 is the first year of secondary school, so first year at hogwarts. also we don’t say groceries here lol just say he had to do some food shopping

Good story! I started following this story when you first started. It has some twists I havent seen. I hope you plan to finish it.. left us hanging. i hate that!

It's too bad you stopped writing the story, I was hoping to see the trials.
Maybe you'll consider an update after your current fanfic is over?

Excellent cover story. It'll be ironic if they really find some diseased rats.

Smart move, making a story about the infected rats to find a traitor.

No doubt Harry is really happy to see his baby sister.

I already like the changes. I wonder. who is going to be the first to misuse the portkey necklace.

Dumbledore really thinks talking to Snape can solve anything? He'll be disappointed.

Let's hope Amelia will be successful, and Fudge won't be able to interfere.

Trial transcript for Sirius Black? Good luck trying to find it.

It makes sense to move against Snape now, when headmaster is in weak position after troll attack.

The results are way more believable that a troll defeated by levitation charm.