|Reviews for The Cullen Manor
| Agsters chapter 58 . 12/29/2021
You’re a great writer and that’s what made me stick with this story so far, but this addition of Jacob was unnecessary while nearing the end of the story when things should be wrapping up. I think I’ll stop here
| Agsters chapter 54 . 12/29/2021
Something I like about this Bella is she’s written in a realistic manner. If she’s uncomfortable in a situation she voices it, at least in her mind. Like, Everything about an intimate moment is usually written as perfect, but she acknowledges that it is a bit uncomfortable, even strange. Overall, she is slowly but surely having a strong character development. Moreover, although humble, she embraces the luxuries offered to her (because who wouldn’t?) and isn’t depicted as this heroic figure who must turn down all the goods for her moral’s sake.
| Agsters chapter 54 . 12/29/2021
This chapter was written so beautifully! Art at its finest
| Agsters chapter 51 . 12/29/2021
I love that Bella acknowledges this
| Agsters chapter 24 . 12/29/2021
I am so uncomfortable with this Edward. As much as I want to know what happens next, I just can’t see Bella actually falling in love with him, what with the ways he’s been treating her. It just wouldn’t be right with his pushy, manipulative ways. Hard to fathom that men were actually like this
| Alex PT 2 chapter 62 . 11/4/2021
Like a religious prude kink thing but I hated that aspect. I disliked Bella's obliviousness to men and sex, lack of sex education, etc. I hated that her choices were between two men who have serial assaulted her but it's presented as a good thing or a heartbreaking tie. I CRIED in the last chapter, it was very well written and very sad; you write emotional dialogue so well! But unfortunately that was almost the only incident of emotional dialogue in the story. I hope to God that you've continued writing and hopefully make a career of it one day, I just never wanna read another Twilight fanfiction of yours Thank you for the effort you put it into this captivating story
| Alex chapter 62 . 11/4/2021
Here is my honest opinion (I know I'm reviewing this 5 years later I'm sorry). I read this about halfway through 4 or 5 years ago but didn't finish it. I randomly decided to read it all the way through this month. I think you're a great writer, genuinely, you have great talent and the world you've created totally captured me, even if the writing was occasionally a little unpolished. However, in honesty, I despised everything about every character except I suppose Angela. I hated that every single love scene except for chapter 62's is essentially a sexual assault, with Bella always fighting back, pushing away, or not wanting it. I know that that is supposed to be the theme of the fic, religious prude kink
| Guest chapter 62 . 5/20/2021
Hey! So I just read your story. It was really really amazing in the beginning but at the end it felt a bit lost. Still I appreciate all the efforts you put into it and I’m very glad that you provided us with such entertainment :))
| JayNahNah chapter 62 . 10/31/2020
I wish there had been a true epilogue
| JayNahNah chapter 61 . 10/31/2020
I actually hated Bella in this chapter. She thinks she’s mature but she came across as a spoiled brat.
| itsm3kyla chapter 61 . 10/21/2020
Bella is a fucking whore. Edward deserves better
| Hoa3 chapter 62 . 7/24/2020
Love this story. Update soon please.
| StrawberryFreesia chapter 19 . 7/17/2020
Hmmmm see Edward is such a contradiction. I can't help but think he has greater depth to him and his feelings toward Bella are much deeper...but I think he gets so lost in his shallow fascade,,...ugh I don't know I don't understand him. I feel like your story ends at the beginning. There's clearly so much more to Edward and it would be good to see them learn to become loving equals that respect and lean on one another above all else and all others.
| StrawberryFreesia chapter 17 . 7/17/2020
I wish you didn't finish this story when you did. I never really ended up liking this Edward much. if you continued on and we saw his develop into someone devoted to bella above money, his siblings and stuff I'd reconsider. He started showing potential but we never find out how much he takes Bella's words to heart when she tells him of her lonliness, misery and feeling unable to speak to him because of his power and feeling unequal so this story just felt unfinished for me.
| pinkshoes81 chapter 62 . 6/24/2020
Loved it but wish there was more x