|Reviews for Tartarus|
| aals chapter 53 . 11/13
| Ellie chapter 1 . 10/19
Hi! This chapter is amazing! Love it. It's amazing. Your stories are the best i have ever read in my life! Wish i could make a story that is as amazing as this! Love it! xxxxxx
| Ellie chapter 53 . 10/18
This story is amazing. How do you think all of this through? I wish i could write a story this good! I love the jokes/puns that you did for Percy! You're such a great writer. Carry on writing! xxx
| Maya Kaminaga chapter 1 . 9/12
Hi! I like your story :-)
| Alexa Skywalker chapter 5 . 9/7
Wow. That was pretty exciting. THEY'D BETTER ALL BE OKAY.
| Singing Fire chapter 53 . 8/23
Thanks for the dedication, but all the credit goes to you for continuing this. youve done a brilliant job with this Fanfiction and you made it your own.
its a great final chapter, wrapping up loose ends and bringing in Tyson and Sally for Percy, and the chapter gave the implication that things are going to be looking up from now one, and everything is back in order.
Congratulations on finishing the story, and a job well done. Double thumbs up and five stars.:D
| Singing Fire chapter 52 . 8/23
Phew...Percy is alright and everything seems to be back tomorrow. Im sad that the fic is wrapping up, but its well done and you put a lot of effort into continuing this, so congrats on finishing it! And I'm so glad you brought Chiron back into the loop of things. Ive missed him a lot throughout the course of the HOO series, and I'm glad hes not let out. Brilliant writing, as always.
| emeraldz23 chapter 53 . 8/9
OH MY GODS! DO U EVEN KNOW HOW AMAZING U R? IM SORRY BUT THIS IS A WAAAAAYYYYYY BETTER VERSION THAN RICK'S. IT HAD MORE PERCY AND ANNABETH IN IT AND HAZEL AS WELL. BoO BASICALLY JUST HAD THE NEW PEOPLE IN IT AND NOT REALLY ANY PERCY AND I LIKED THE WAY U ENDED IT WITH PERCY COZ FACE IT WITHOUT PERCY THE WORLD WOULD BE VERY BORING AND PROBABLY COMPLETELY DESTROYED.
I HAVE SO MANY THINGS TO SAY BUT TYPING IN CAPS LOCK DOESNT REALLY GIVE U MUCH SPACE BUT I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT THIS WAS AWESOME. I KNOW THAT UR NOT THINKING OF MAKING A SEQUEL BUT WOULD U THINK ABOUT? PLEASE?
I NEED MORE OF UR AWSOMENESS!
| Singing Fire chapter 51 . 8/2
Yeah, it's a hug party. I'm not sure if Athena apologized the Annabeth in BoO, but I'm glad you included that in the fanfic. And Thalia was there! I hope she sticks around for the rest of the show. Keep the chapters coming!
| Singing Fire chapter 50 . 8/2
Wow...brutal metaphysical battle going on there. Thank the gods Tartarus was finall shown the door, and he will hopefully get his just desserts for all that he had Annabeth and Percy put up with.
And you totally own more of this story than I do. I chipped in four chapters. You chipped in the continuing 46 and counting. You easily own this story and have given it the justice it deserves. Thanks for taking it on. You've written it better than I could.
| Singing Fire chapter 49 . 8/2
Yikes - I'm guessing either Tartarus is extracting revenge for Gaea, or is trying to gain a foothold for some kind of mind torture or to use Annabeth and Percy to achieve his goals. Either way, bad news. Nervous for the battle now and how they will break Tartarus's hold. Your writing and the build up for the next chapter are awesome!
| Singing Fire chapter 48 . 8/2
Well, totally forgot about Percy and Annabeth, so I hope they make it to the final battle with the Titans and can kick some serious $$. Also, Titans in the throne room screams trouble at this point. Hopefully, everyone gets back in time to stop world ending soon from raining down and that our heroes can catch a cat nap on the flight. They deserve some rest. Fantastic writing, as always. I have high hopes for the Titans stand-off :)
| Singing Fire chapter 47 . 8/2
Yeah, they battle has been won! I'll just have to cross my fingers that Leo will be okay through everything 'earth explosive'. And that Jason will end up unharmed too. Excited to read the next chapter.
| Singing Fire chapter 46 . 8/2
Phew - at least Jason's still okay. Let's hope our heroes (and the gods) can stick it to Gaea. You're writing is amazing, and I really hope you stick through with it to the very end. Your writing, as always, is riveting.
| Asphodel Gray chapter 17 . 7/25
A story about two kids, around age five, who meet at a park. Both of them have one parent fighting in a war, and they bond...not caring that their parents are fighting on opposite sides.
Is that a good theme?