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Rayne chapter 44 . 11/3/2014 Hey can you pleeeeasse write a songfic with the song 'I'm Yours' by Jason Mraz? It fits so well with Leo's feelings for Calypso. I would love it if u wrote it since you are pretty much an expert at understanding their relationship. Maybe he could play it at their wedding or something, or propose to her with it. Yeah. That would be sweeeet. I would do it myself, but no time :( |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/2/2014 CHAPTER 12 OPENED MY EYES. That was really deep. You are such a well spoken person, and I hope you never stop writing :D |
247 Fangirl chapter 44 . 11/2/2014 Psst... It's past Halloween... |
NinjaOfAwesome chapter 41 . 11/2/2014 Leo liking Jason... ewwwwww... |
flyinghorizons chapter 3 . 11/1/2014 It often takes me a while to truly get into a fanfic, but you've done it so well, I'm already in YOUR world. I have a deep problem of not being able to see characters in my head properly when it's not Riordan (or any author) writing the content, but I love how I can see them in my head with your writing. Unfortunately I'm busy writing my own fanfiction and I'm in the middle of my exams, so i'll be reading yours a bit slowly, but I've got to say, I REALLY look forward to it. Basically, you're killing it. :D |
Anne chapter 44 . 11/1/2014 I hope you had a good Halloween. I went retro to...I was Artemis. |
Keeper of the Flame chapter 8 . 11/1/2014 "confusingly attractive" Oh hot DAMN! You portray Calypso, raging, in-denial, Calypso, so perfectly! Leo, you freakin lucky Latino elf! |
Princess Of Flames chapter 44 . 11/1/2014 Oh My God. I feel like a horrible person for not reviewing this and the previous chapter. But I can explain I have finals going on and I don't have much time to read. But any who, amazing chapter girl. You are totally into Leo and Calypso's character and I like how you portray Piper as Calypso's close friend. And I loved the talk on the beach scene it was amazing and well structured. Make more chapters and I can't wait to see what you do with the date scene. Its gonna be awesome and poor overwhelmed Calypso would be there too. I think. Update soon |
NinjaOfAwesome chapter 40 . 10/31/2014 I wonder what the prophecy will be... |
mcstiels chapter 44 . 10/29/2014 Wow. Just wow! Those cuties are going on a date! Once again, thank you soooo much for this awesome story! You're the best! :) |
mcstiels chapter 43 . 10/29/2014 AHHHHHHHHHH! Caleo fluff! Seriously, where do you get all this awesomeness? :) |
Pjo-Hoo-Forever chapter 25 . 10/29/2014 FDDHADR FLUFFFFFFFF YESSSSSSSSSSSSBHKYFHSFGFSY |
A Voice in the Desert chapter 44 . 10/28/2014 Just wanted to let you know that I've been reading this story for the past couple days and honestly loved it. I went searching to get some Leo/Calypso fix after finishing Blood of Olympus and I sort of blindly stumbled on to this story. Needless to say, I was more than pleasantly surprised. You've done a fantastic job of keeping everyone in character and I can honestly say that I've been impressed how you've managed to really flesh out Calypso while staying true to her backstory. Thank you for highlighting her faults and really underscoring the difficulties a goddess would have transitioning back to normal life. It really brings the story alive and makes he want to keep reading (and makes the characters far more enjoyable). Also, I love the minor details (Damocles, the interactions with Nyssa and the other Demeter kids) that you include. I'm very interested to see where you go with Rachel and the supposed prophecy. Thanks for writing and great job! VotD |
Kfromcabin6 chapter 44 . 10/28/2014 Yay! I like how you made Calypso fit in even when she wasn't trying to, and how she always beats him to the relationship firsts. And can you believe the lack of Caleo in BOO? I was like, why isn't there anything in here, he has to go back for her, and then we get one chapter. Seriously? I do hope we see more of them, sometime. Whether it is in five years (because rick said he always wanted to do te Norse guys, so i think it will be a longer series), or in a little update book like Demigod Files, I need more Caleo. Wouldn't you agree? Psyche and Psychos, Kfromcabin6 P.S. Did you see Ricks ALS Ice Bucket Challenge? If not, go watch it. It's hilarious. Here's a sneak peak: "IS THAT ALL YOU GOT KHIONE?!" |
shainag322 chapter 44 . 10/27/2014 I'm going as a 1920s flapper for Halloween! I just don't have vampire mixed in. I saw that and was like "OMG! Me, too!" But now I feel kinda silly cuz I said that in a really high pitched voice… |