Reviews for Sky is over
The Richmaster chapter 13 . 5/31
This has been a really great story; I've enjoyed reading it and the build-up in this chapter was brilliant with the uncertainty of sides, imminent danger and shifting sides, it's pity that we probably won;t see what happens next.
The Richmaster chapter 12 . 5/31
That was an interesting plan and I loved Jack's response at the end there
The Richmaster chapter 11 . 5/31
Well, I definitely like how you're portraying Jack and Raimundo here, it's really in-depth
The Richmaster chapter 10 . 5/31
That was just fun, seeing them all act like that
The Richmaster chapter 9 . 5/31
It's nice to see that Jack is using some real tactics this time around, though that last comment made me think about things that I would rather not have
The Richmaster chapter 8 . 5/31
And the big reveal has finally come and they handled it surprisingly well all things considered
The Richmaster chapter 7 . 5/31
The Jack vs Raimundo situation seemed to be done really well, with how their personalities and insecurities play off the other's.
And the Katnappe Tubbimura alliance was unexpected but it makes sense considering how blase Jack was
The Richmaster chapter 6 . 5/31
I liked your back-story for Raimundo, it does a lot to explain some of his thoughts and actions and Jack's 'taste of power' was handled well
The Richmaster chapter 5 . 5/31
Megan was fun and I'm loving how casual Jack's being with this
The Richmaster chapter 4 . 5/31
I liked Jack's interaction with 'his' mother and Raimundo's thoughts seemed pretty well-done too
The Richmaster chapter 3 . 5/31
This new relationship with the Xiaolin is good, I could definitely see something like this happening
The Richmaster chapter 2 . 5/31
This is definitely feeling more like a partnership than what happens canon
The Richmaster chapter 1 . 5/31
Nice start; the interactions between Jack and Wuya are fun with him having more confidence, though I hope he did something a bit more tasteful than just burying his alternate in the back garden
largomolo chapter 11 . 8/2/2015
I get the feeling rai and jack could be friends in this au since rai is the only one who accepts his life choices.
The Night Hunter chapter 13 . 4/30/2015
Wybacz za bardzo późną recenzję ale chyba przegapiłem te historię jak pojawił się nowy rodział. Tak więc świetna robata. Bardzo podobał mi się ten rodział. Miło zobaczyć ja Jakowi coś w końcu wychodzi, mama nadzieję ze w następnym rozdziale zobaczymy trochę walki.
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