Reviews for Chances |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was sad and beautiful! and kept me up all night reading it! i adore this story and appreciate the reality of it all! and the debts of the characters! and finally just the unending love jake and bella have for each other no matter what! thank you for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was gut wrenching and intense and yet awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was deep! both of them need to be whole! and forgiveness needs to set in! i love how bella tried to humanize jedi and allowing him to have some sense of normalcy |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooo buuurn! it 4 am where im like oh my freaking gosh! talk about what comes around goes around! this chapter HURT bella getting a taste of her own medicine wheb it came to her shoving edward in jacobs face |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did it again, I can’t believe I read these for free… crazy xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I signed up for an actual ACCOUNT to write this review. Rather than being a lurker. Shocking. This was really good. Yes, it needs an edit, but just a polish. I write, I edit, I know it would only need one pass through. It's really close, and I couldn't put it down. I've been addicted to J/B fanfic recently (late arrival, I know) and this is the best one I've found. I will now think of this as Canon after the first half of BD, forgetting the ridiculous Renesme plot. I know you can't sell this, so what's the point of polishing? But damn. Wish my first drafts were this compelling. Will look for this author's original works. 3 |
![]() ![]() Oh my lord this was amazing. Better than actual print books I've read. I hope you're doing something and going somewhere with this honey. |
![]() ![]() Tbh i was ALSO feeling antsy and unnerved and i rly thought it was abt that envelope so i was like axtually rly disappointed when they started making out passionately cuz all a girl wants is to know WHAT'S in the FUCKING envelope |
![]() ![]() fantastic |
![]() ![]() OH MY LORD |
![]() ![]() OH EM GEEE I READ HALF OF THIS THING IN 8HRS GIRL I GOT SCHOOL BUT GUESS WHO STAYED UP TIL 3AM THE FUCK |
![]() ![]() Ah ma LORD so GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just finished your amazing story - you really have me rethinking everything I thought I knew about Edward. Not sure if I will ever be able to read a story and look at him the same way. Anyway, I know it's been a long time since you wrote this and probably don't even read the reviews anymore, but I just wanted to share how much I loved your very powerful and well written work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been years sonce I’ve read this fic. Its one of my favs as it satisfies that dark, angsty need with a tortured,but sinfully delicious Jake. I love this fic with all yhe detail and subtle interplay with the pack. You are an incredible writer. Would love to know if you’re still writing, as I’d read anything you create. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking love this story. I actually love the way you write and how real your characters are. I'm not usually one to review, sad I know, but I devoured this story and I could not let it go by without saying something. |