Reviews for AU: A Hero's Choice Rewrite
Ruairi J.L chapter 2 . 3/1/2018
Yep... it's rushed to hell. Sorry, but I won't be continuing.
Ruairi J.L chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
Hmm... this story is exactly the concept that I was, on a whim, searching for, but so far it seems to be a tale of two authors. By that I mean that it seems as if two separate people are writing it, for the first half of this opening chapter is decently paced, but the second half is an absolute mess. Oh, well. I'll give it a go.
Crystalzap chapter 6 . 9/30/2016
well this was better than cannon, i hated how Videl was able to bully Gohan into training her to fly, at least you made it where it was mostly voluntary. Goku actually seem to have been a good influence with Gohan as he didn't just cave to her
LoveKaiza chapter 6 . 4/6/2016
I like the thought of a more likeable Videl. The one reason i didn't like her is because she always seemed to be too pushy to me. This version's better
Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2015
You should update this story it's really good
Guest chapter 6 . 7/29/2015
It's great so far if you ever continue it please don't make Hercules a idiot the only people stronger then him are the really strong people plus I love when he befriends buu
abdullah rehman chapter 6 . 7/19/2015
hurry make more
wheathermangohanssj4 chapter 5 . 2/1/2015
Okay now I'm done.

I saw the warning signs in the last couple of chapters, cheap shots at Chi-chi, not letting Gohan being Gohan

and now your skipping the Saiyaman arch, getting rid of the entirety of the development between Gohan and Videl.
wheathermangohanssj4 chapter 4 . 2/1/2015
Aaaand pointless costume change just to be "different" from cannon.

Great, those aren't stupid, pointless, and a flat out insult to the conagrafy of the original series.

Now of all the costume too change, Gohan's school out is the least that does that but still, it's really obvious that gohan picked that out himself, if chi-chi picked it out it would be soooo much more stuffy looking.

Gohan was a nerd, don't try and say it was all Chi-Chi because it wasn't, chichi didn't make him do Saiyaman, and that fit him perfectly, I don't care what anyone else says.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/4/2015
Videl really nosy... but meh
Ky111 chapter 6 . 12/28/2014
Enjoying the story so far, not as many changes to the story as I was hoping for. I do like Goku's approach toward the Cell Games a lot better than what happened in the anime (I didn't have a problem with Goku relying on Gohan for final victory but his approach was terrible, I mean he should of used the left over time to help prepare Gohan mentally [during the 9 days after they finished their physical training in the HBTC] for the fight not just go on like everything was fine then the day of the fight comes fight first, lose then go by the way Gohan your stronger than me go fight the monster).

Later.
goddragonking chapter 6 . 6/2/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
dolguldur chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
This is a great rewrite, but I think that instead of rewriting you should write a sequel to, maybe make it a crossover or just an epic continuation of DBZ
just a suggestion
Mr.PuffPuff chapter 6 . 4/21/2014
I just found your stuff recently and I really like it
CMCMC chapter 6 . 3/16/2014
So is there any chance we will see an update for this story soon?
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