Reviews for Chaos Theory
xYellowSagex chapter 1 . 3h
I'M CRYING AT THREE A.M READING THIS STORY! GAWD THIS STORY IS SO GREAT! YOU
buneab chapter 1 . 4/7
Still my absolute favourite one shot. So tragically beautiful and bittersweet.. It never fails to bring tears to my eyes. Bravo!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
This was so beautiful. I wish he didn't have to die but there couldn't have been another way. I can't picture them together. Hinata is the heir now n for her to be wd him shed have to leave it behind, something she fought really hard for. So yeah, I love this fic. It was a BLAST!
deideiblueeyez chapter 1 . 2/25
Um, excuse me, but how dare you make one of my favorite rare pairs this perfectly portrayed?!
Mezuri chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Your words were beautiful. They touched my heart and made me think.
I really liked this story.
There aren't that many good Deidara fics out there but you captured his character very well. I also liked Hinata's portrayal. The words and songparts you chose accented the general mood well and awakened many feelings in me. Mostly awe and sadness but I think you get that I enjoyed this story very much.
Zhane17 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
IT HURTS AND IM CRYING SO MUCH.

this is such a wonderful literacy piece and i wouldnt want this any other way, im in love with this. ;v; like goodness, the emotions was so strong and realistic i was genuinely hurting for the art genius and hyūga heiress.

like, i really love how the characters didnt sound ooc at all, it's like that's how theyd really act if ever this was canon. i also love the fact how you made their love connected to deidara's philosophy of art. fleeting but it lingers. brief but it made such a huge impression to us, readers. like, i cannot—this was downright beautiful and flawless, definitely one of the best thing i have ever read. this is something id totally reread in my spare time. :)

/highkey tempted to lowkey ship deihina more than naruhina
Deidara chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Wow, so beautiful. I was enthralled during the whole thing. You portrayed them so well. Thank you.
Moonbeam chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
Holy cow that was beautiful
That was utterly amazing thank you so much for writing that - I read it all in one go I couldn't stop!
This deserves way more reviews than it has!
The poetic justice (or is it injustice?) in the ending really hit me in the feels, an amazing sign off however sad it may be...
Anyway keep writing marvellous pieces like this! I'll be reading ;)
Xxx moonbeam
jemxmarcial chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Damn. DAMN.

This is a masterpiece. You don't know how much I would cherish this work. This is so beautiful and tragic. I've known from the start that there's no way this story would end with rainbows and unicorns but daaaamn. That didn't stop the tears from flowing. Kudos to you. The angst in this story is overflowing and it's my guilty pleasure. The tears are all worth it. It's just... beautiful. I can't think of any other words. I've read some of your other works and I love them. But honestly, this work touched me. This work of yours made me realize things about myself and my life. Damn. I love Deidara so fucking much but I guess that ending was fitting for a person such as he was. This is so close to reality as much as the Narutoverse could be and you did one very good job with it. Hands down.

["Guess not. But can you believe it? Deidara was Akatsuki, and this whole time he was actually destroying them. Talk about irony."

"How'd he die?"

"Well, he did it himself, apparently. The guy was nuts, blowing shit up like a little kid. But he took a bunch of Akatsuki scum with him. Guess he wasn't that bad in the end. They say it was a sight to see."]

This part really killed me the most. I thought there would never be a character death that could hurt me more than Itachi's but daaamn. Daaaamn. DAMN. I'm so looking forward to more of your works of crack-pairing. Like Hidan/Hinata or Tenten/Kakuzu. I don't know but I love this so much. You're a very good writer. You don't give the readers the typical happy ending but you made the journey to the end enjoyable (though there were barrels of tears that were shed). It was good to read something heart-wrenching and tear-jerking. I don't know if I'd be able to read anything better than this. This is just the epitome of angst, heartbreak, acceptance and romance all in one.
BadxGood chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
I must say this was hands down my favorite Deidara x Hinata Fanfic I have read.
infinite eternity chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
Beautiful ending. I love all your stories; I'm sure I've said before.
criminalsenzuri chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
This was so good! What an unlikely couple but you really made it work and it even made a lot of sense. In my headcanon Deidara is like *extremely* gay too but for some reason i had no problem believing this. It was just so well written. I cried a bit during Hinata's fight with her father, and also a bit when they hooked up. And neither of them seemed out of character, even for a second. Thanks for the wonderful read!
DarkJewel55 chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
you have no idea how much i needed to read this, no idea. i knew there was a reason why i loved Deidara so damn much... i love this story so much, so so much. i never even thought of this pairing before, i used to think they weren't suited for each other at all, but you changed my mind. seriously, this is one of those perfect pieces you see every few thousand fics, so absolutely perfect. They were so in character and realistic. i rarely see stories as meaningful and powerful as this one. and I've been reading for YEARS, i practically grew up reading fanfiction (and fiction...) and i am so happy i found this fic. I've been very indecisive about things these days, too scared to do anything, say anything... but now i know exactly what to do. I've always been straightforward and blunt (and a bit rude...) and i was never afraid of anything, i used to face life with my head held high, but i lost myself. i forgot who i was at the core. so, thank you, for helping me find myself again. Deidara is my favourite Naruto character, simply because he reminds me so much of myself, it's creepy. i was very upset to see him go, and i hated Sasuke for a while there (still do...). anyway, what i meant to say is; i love this story so much it hurts... i will never EVER forget reading it, ever. and I love you for writing it. i have no other words for it. it's the type of fic to make you go all 'woah' and have to take a moment to cool down. it's just so awesome! again, love you!
guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
LOVE this to pieces! so beautifully written and Deidara and Hinata's relationship was so deep and meaningful. THANK YOU for writing this! :)
baeyonce chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
you have destroyed my soul and will to live my god, this was so beautifully written! love the angsty ending, even though i was rooting for a fluffy one. amazing!
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