Reviews for Heavenly Shower
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23
I love it haha and the end is awesome ! Nice
Mr. Anoumanous chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
this was hilarious and sexy keep it up
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
RIP Cake~Chan
It literally burned in hell.
May it find sweet PIECE in the after life.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
That was awesome! I love yumikuri and to read that made me really happy thank you for that. Please keep on writing ffs
Julius Night chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Nice work, did very well with this!
notagoodjudge chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
no romance just lust if thats what your into faine but if you wanna write another one down try and make things a bit less pornographic although the pronographic side of things was great it lacked anything else a bit too much
hime chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
ur so goooood!
Guest10120 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
What?! Are you serious? Do you think it sucks? Then you are crazy because I like it. The love between those two is beautiful, it would be great if you write more!
Continue writing please.
CanaanAlphardForever chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I can assure you this doesn't suck at all. You captured their characters fairly well, and the idea of this story is adorable XD that beginning with Ymir in the mess of a kitchen made me giggle. That shower scene was hot and beautiful at the same time, though it could have been slightly more developed. It was okay, really. I enjoyed this story a lot and I'll look forward to any future ones you write thank you for writing this
Melah94 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Lol the ending xD thank you for this!