Reviews for The Second Chance
nanciellen chapter 1 . 3/8
Love this story. Always thought it a shame in the original P&P that Mary didn't marry Mr. Collins. Well conceived and written. Thank you.
sad sabrin chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
wow this is nice
will you continue? or is it just a one shot?
Astonishment chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Thank you for sharing! I don't mind that Collins was less-ridiculous - perhaps Mary would have a positive effect on him. Great story!
LucilleRicardo chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Very nice story. You wrote Mary's feelings well, and I am glad she finds happiness!
Dovecot55 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Mr Collin can never be charming, he is a toad. Mary deserves better. I don't know why some people try to make Mary the underdog, the one that fairs less than the other sisters. If you remember in the orignal story Mrs Bennet stated that Elizabeth was plain. Mary might have looked as well as the other sisters but that would not have made her plain either.