Reviews for Incubus
Mlanie762 chapter 1 . 1/22
Damn! This was intense for a oneshot! Wonder how would react Axel when he finds out who Roxas really is... Should be funny I guess! Anyway, awesome work, as always! On to your next fic in the list! XD
Hylianshadow86 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Holy crap...I think you broke my fanboy! This was absolutely amazing in every way. Good story, hot sex, and sweet love/mating! Fantastic job!
Moxie Danger chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Holy cow. I've never read anything like this before and goddamn, this is a mind-blowing piece of writing - the entire concept is enthralling (for lack of a better word). I've been a fan of your work for an absolute age and i cannot wait to see more of this story.
Crashley chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
This is so hot! I'm in love with your writing! I hope to read more of this story in the nearer future! I'm not detoured by Mpreg as long as it makes sense to me and the points of the story add up. You are such a wonderful writer and I'm so relieved I found you on this site! I already finished reading a few other of your stories and I love all of them! :) I hope I can continue to read more from this story and others in the future!
YourGreatestDream chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
OMG, that was beautiful. Hot hot hot pornspeak, I can't even-! The way you pour emotions into words it just makes them come alive, and man to a reader like me that is magic.
CharmingFire813 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
...HOLY HOT MAMA! O_O Roxas is sooo bad A! he has powers! thats so cool! poor Axel was exposed... PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! that was the hottest yaoi ive ever read IN MY LIFE! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Ah, pornspeak and the old "first fucklove" cliche.
EchoSkies chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
...I absolutely love this story! End of discussion. -faints on floor-
The Orgasmic Uke chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Uh well. Damn. Haha. I'm left a little speechless here. That was freaking amazing. The sex was powerful but the STORY behind it was amazing. I would just LOVE to have more. Like how Axel reacts once he realizes what's really happened to him and what he has agreed to. But I love it as it is as well. Beautifully written as always. You have yet to write anything that I have not enjoyed. Well done as always 3 I look forward to reading more from you.
Takara yume chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Ahh that was really hot hehe I like how you incorporated spirits and demons and the like in this one ; v ;
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Sequel? Now? Sequel now, please?
Rosepetal987 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I'd opened this story on my phone when you first posted it and finally got around to reading it.
Nothing better to distract someone from the grossness of being a woman than some good AkuRoku, right?
fungeki chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
That was amazing. I wasn't quite sure how you were going to make a one-side fuck from a succubus turn into a passionate loving one but you did it and it was amazing!

I would love to see more of this universe. See Axel's reaction to what Roxas really is, and how Roxas would take to being loved with no lust. Gah! *squeals in a corner*
AmyHeartXVIII chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
*mouth hanging open*...Oh...oh my god...that was gorgeous. I mean that was really...wow. I know it's a one shot that most would just read for the sex scene but it also touches someone on a personal level. That base desire to be wanted, to be used for pleasure and to receive pleasure- both physical and emotional. That is what makes this so perfect. Thank you for writing it.
RoyalDragon540 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
That was so wonderfully written! Loved it! Loooooooved it!
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