Reviews for Faintest, Slimmest, Wildest Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh darn, I was so hoping to see what Ginny would do when she saw Harry...like crawl into bed next to him? LOVED the addition of Amy - looks like she was just what the Weasleys needed to get out of their grieving "fog" long enough to eat and get some rest. I do hope you'll update the next chapter soon? I can hardly wait to see what happens with them next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the hopefulness of this beginning! :) I enjoyed seeing a story start out from the pov of Professor McGonagall, proud of her students and her Gryffindors! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really going to be hard to read. Because as they remember, I remember too and it's so bad. I hated JKR that she killed Fred of. :/ Again, you have done great with the Weasley interaction, I love reading them! And I love, that you have smuggled some humor in this, it makes it realistic. Can't wait til next Wednesday though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooooooooooh, I'm in! :D A perfect start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I remember this. It is your story from Camp NaNoWriMo . Whoo Hoo! I was really looking forward to reading this so now I'm thrilled that we finally get to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww wish Ginny had run to Harry instead; but I guess it is a little soon. Love Amy Green, is she yours from another story, she is sorta familiar. Look forward to reading this going forward. Off to a great start. Now if only Sirius and Dobby had survived. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the image of the Fat Lady pouting and her rushing throught the portraits to get in place and being all out of breath. But what I really loved was Bill! The absurdity of the Fred is dead line was perfect. It's strange, the things that you think about at moments like that. And surprise, surprise: AMY! (Now that little drabble makes since, you sneaky devil, slipping spoilers in without telling us.) That dynamic was very interesting, especially Fleur: her initial jealousy, marking her claim, then letting it go. But I felt bad for her when first Amy took over and completely at home with the Weasley, then feeling left out when the sleeping arrangements were announced. Favorite bit: Percy saying Ron was taller than Bill and Bill denying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice beginning. I guess I can skip over the really x-rated spots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait! :)))) I've been cheering you on from another continent, and I'm so glad to see this fic finally up! :)) The teasers on the Nano site were perfect, and I've been looking forward to this since you told us about it. :)) Beautiful first chapter. :)) I love the Minerva POV and all the names mentioned. I love how Cho was there, a pretty contrast to the Harry-Ginny relationship. I can't wait for more, for more Weasleys, for more Harry, for more tears and more smiles. Thanks for always sharing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! It's here! I liked how you used McGonagall to set the scene, both reminding us where everybody stood at the end of DH and subtly hinting at things that may cause conflict later on, like Ginny, Neville and Luna being sent to the Forbidden Forest *at the full moon.* I like that McGonagall seems to have not processed what Harry revealed about Snape. That seems believable, especially for all that she has believed him responsible for in the last year. Great start! I eagerly await the next update! Wednesdays are my favorite day of the week again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More, more, more please! I love it from McGonagall's POV, can't wait for the rest of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea to do the prologue from Mcgonagall's POV. I'll be looking forward to your next update to see how the story goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! McGonagall kicks ass 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah changing Colin age! Am curious to why you change it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok! I'm Looking forward to where you will take our favorite characters. hehehe, I loved how Cho reverted back to being a student when McGonagall gave her a command. |