|Reviews for Allegiant: How It Should Have Ended|
| Mandy chapter 1 . 9/19
You have a good story but i completely disagree with you. don't get me wrong i love tris' character but i did think it was necessary for her character to die in the third book. through out the whole series she is learning what true sacrifice is. It is not constantly throwing yourself in danger to be brave,but the sacrifice has to be about the love of one another and what you would do with that. I think that clearly represents what here parents were trying to teach her in abnegation. she needed to make the choice because she had to,not because she wanted to. just my thoughts loved your take on the story.
| anonymos chapter 4 . 8/4
pls write more
| HMDSRQ98 chapter 4 . 6/19
absolutely fucking awesome. u just saved my day, mate. good job.
| moli chapter 2 . 5/30
this makes me such a happy potato
im gonna go ignore the fact that tris died and keep reading
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/5
Thanks so mush for taking the time to write for us. I really apriciate it!
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/5
Will you write more?!
| NFrana101 chapter 4 . 12/29/2015
WHY WHY WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO US
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
I think that she should have lost her memory.
It wouldn't be dying but , in a way it would be.
It would have been a really good ending.
| Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 4 . 11/15/2015
NOOOOOOO! A CLIFFHANGER! PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT SHE SAYS!
| Isobel chapter 4 . 10/27/2015
| miccy chapter 4 . 10/22/2015
| Uhg chapter 4 . 10/15/2015
Don't stop you captivated me and now you just stopped NOOOOOOO YOU BETTER KEEP WRITING!
| Anonymous chapter 4 . 9/27/2015
That was amazing! But please can you make another chapter soon because I reall want to know what happens
| katie chapter 4 . 9/20/2015
please wright more!
| Boop chapter 4 . 8/27/2015
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