Reviews for The Awakening
Robin.D chapter 1 . 4/16
that was good :-) :-) :-)
The Original Miss Darling chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
beautiful and cute i love Bellice :)
TinaF chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
That was so good. Hot. Awesome one-shot. Wish it was longer though!
bev316 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
bettina whitlock chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
i like
T.S.Hubbard chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
This should be a full multi chapter story. It has lots of ways you could go with it. It made me wonder how bella would deal with being with edward now that she knows she should be with alice instead. please think about it. great work.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
You should keep going
GhostxHunterxLlamas chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Now, if only this was more than a oneshot. This was amazing!
Bobbi123 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Hey, that was a well done one-shot. Loved the lemon...very hot. You should think about continuing the story...I really like this super confident Alice. Also, nice dedication...Dreamless is the best.
xDreamlessx chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Daww, that was beautiful! I loved it, a very perfect drabble, short and sweet. Loved the precise dialogue, loved the environmental imagery. And loved the title too - a very multi-layered awakening, lol. Thanks for the dedication. ;)
Bellice Fan chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
That was really good...too bad it was just a one shot. Loved it!
tlc125 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
That was really, very good! Thank you for sharing.