Reviews for Familiar of Zero, Spartan-III
Seraphy64 chapter 2 . 12/30/2020
Yeeeeeeah no. A Spartan would have shot Colbert's head off when being threatened and told he was gonna be enslaved.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2020
Enzio wtf kind of name
AMurder0fCrows chapter 2 . 2/26/2020
why is it so difficult to find a story where they outright say no to being bound. ugh, this had so many chapters too. oh well, back to searching...
AMurder0fCrows chapter 2 . 2/26/2020
just another tool to be used...
Atryx10 chapter 20 . 1/27/2020
Meh story so far, 4/10.
Atryx10 chapter 11 . 1/26/2020
What is he, bipolar?!
Atryx10 chapter 9 . 1/26/2020
this super soldier is super sus.
Atryx10 chapter 7 . 1/26/2020
I'm pretty sure he forgot to mention his 'hyper lethal' designation, and that he's the second person to ever recieve it.
Atryx10 chapter 5 . 1/26/2020
Forgot to mention, it's pretty easy for a normal current day human to sprint at 10m/s or 36km/h. Usain Bolt can sprint at almost 45km/h.
Atryx10 chapter 6 . 1/26/2020
This chapter was mediocre.
Not sure why he'd call her his master.
In previous chapter he said humanity was outnumbered 21 to 1, but in this he said 7 to 1. Which is it?
Atryx10 chapter 3 . 1/26/2020
it's separated, yay! :D
Atryx10 chapter 2 . 1/26/2020
your rnd notes still aren't separated from the story text :c
Atryx10 chapter 1 . 1/26/2020
It's pretty good. Didn't really necessarily feel like Noble Six has 'Hyper Lethal' designation though.
Also pleasee use something to designate author's notes, like using bold text in author's notes or something like


Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2019
Your a stupid bitch you already know that right? Just let me remind your dumbass.
hapyjohn chapter 19 . 10/3/2019
cool story bro cant wait for the Storm Covenant and UNSC to start fucking shit up
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