Reviews for Unthinkable
guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Legitimately the most beautiful story out there I read it about 5 times before it moved argh is there any other way we would be able to read it? I would totally buy it but I dont have a kindle :L
psymplemind chapter 12 . 1/5/2014
:) beautiful
Thank you for sharing this incredible story with all of us
:)
psymplemind chapter 11 . 1/5/2014
As sad as it is...it's perfect! Abso-fucking-lutley perfect! Applause...
As much as they fight they love each other MORE...i can't imagine one of them going on without the other...
psymplemind chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
Ok this ch was full on Kleenex time...it started with 'but he's not my brother. Thru to the last period.
psymplemind chapter 9 . 1/5/2014
Excellent...what do you do when your only reason for living is gone? How many people in the history of the world have had to face that...from wars, accidents, illnesses...and yet I wouldn't give up my humanity to stop the pain...time does NOT heal all wounds! You grow scar tissue...it's always there with you but you keep going...
psymplemind chapter 8 . 1/5/2014
You got me again! :'(. Sniffle...the Caroline scene over Elena...wow...just wow
psymplemind chapter 7 . 1/5/2014
This chapter got to me...the Deremy scenes were beautiful and faithful to my perception of how Damon would take care of Jeremy if something did happen to Elena...
psymplemind chapter 6 . 1/5/2014
This is just beautiful but so sad...I don't know if you're going to have Damon die and be with her or do like books where she comes back and becomes a guardian...I'm just hoping they aren't forever apart for eternity...
psymplemind chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
Amazing/excellent chapter...
psymplemind chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
OMG again..you're trying to kill us? (Just kidding...sort of)
Rip a person's heart out much? Praying this is going to work out...somehow!
Awesome fiction as are all of your stories but I do not want Elena nor Damon nor Stefan dead-dead! My HEA is Delena! Stefan finds peace and maybe love (always wanted a Katherine-Stefan endgame I think Katherine actually (or close to it!).
I fear most Pleck is going to kill Damon before series ends. Sacrifice himself to save 1. Elena. 2, Stefan. 3. Both? But that's where it seems to be going. Season 5 epi 99... Waiting for epi #100. Katherine may or may not die...lots of reminiscing...e just gotta wait to see where the M-F writers take us! But your stories are good as gold! ;)
psymplemind chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
OMG
psymplemind chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
Amazing
psymplemind chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Indelible! If NLT TVD hired some off you guys ( meaning you a very rare few others) to write their shift!
LCCullen chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
Oh, Goldnox… I’m here! Sorry I suck so bad, lmao. I’m gonna do better I promise!

"Damn, you're pissy today." –I thought that was her every day… sorry Elena gets on my nerves sometimes. Gonna keep that to myself though, at the point in your story she hasn’t gotten too bad yet. ;)

“I pay closer attention to the shapes that are transforming above me, hoping that if I can find something normal in them I won't be stuck in the only psychiatric hospital that's run by a sociopathic vampire.” –I love how she knows he would make her better no matter what she does. It’s his life mission to make sure she is ok.

“He's silent for a moment and I bet he's wondering if he can find me a strait jacket in black.” –Ha! Cuz he can’t have her wearing white! Damon wouldn’t stand for that…

“My stomach rolls when I wonder if he dug the hole. Please, God, please say he didn't. I'd do anything to know that he compelled someone else to make room in the earth for my body. I can't fathom what that would do to him, to stand there for hours with a shovel, to hear the sound of dirt hitting my skin or maybe my coffin, sealing me away. Forever.” –Oh shit, this is deep. Ugh dammit, I hate angst but you write it so beautifully.

“My hand covers my mouth, my shoulders shaking because I already know. He'd never let anyone else be the last to see me, not if he had the choice. He'd want my resting place to be perfect, and he'd never trust anyone to do it but himself.” –Dammit it’s getting deeper!

"You shouldn't be here," he grits out. "I wasn't worth it. None of us were. Not if you're..." He's fully trembling now, the grief and rage he's been bottling on the verge of exploding out of him and this is killing me. "You're dead, Elena. And I'll never forgive you for this." –Fuck, that’s harsh. Damon saying he’ll never forgive her? That’s probably the worst punishment he could give her, to be honest.

“Instead, he merely whispers, "I miss you." –Wow, what a way to end the chapter. I know that it’s not going to be the most difficult chapter by a long shot, but seeing Damon hold all his emotions inside and not show anything at all… That’s hard. Plus we all know that he’s the most sensitive of all… *sobbing*

Great chapter, I am looking forward to the next. See, slowly but surely I’m making my way through them!
LCCullen chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
So, I'm a terrible friend and said that I would read as you wrote and didn't do it. I feel like I'm being pulled in 50 different directions lately and time is not my friend. But, I want to try and catch up now that I'm on my Christmas break. Here goes...

Elena can be so naive sometimes. Did she really think that killing herself would be what was best for everyone? Granted, it saved everyone she loved, but killed them a little bit at the same time. I don't think she realizes just how much that she is the glue that holds everyone together.

Damon is going to break my heart, I can just tell. He's being strong for everyone else and not able to deal with his own grief because no one else will let him. Jeremy, though, I can tell he's going to be a great character. A little flawed, but becoming strong... just like Damon. And he's going to be Damon's rock I think.

Fuckin Stefan, thinking only of himself yet again. I love that you share my severe dislike of him. I hate that I love Paul so much, but he has to play this whiny-ass self-absorbed character. (Though, he does an amazing job at it) Stefan is just ridiculous. If he doesn't man up I don't know how Damon will deal with him.

Sorry that this has been so long coming. I'm going to TRY to do a chapter a day until I can catch up. I hope...
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