|Reviews for Darker Shade of Pale|
| Sallyannerenee chapter 12 . 5/25
Wow. Awesome story. I wasn't able to read it in one sitting, and so I ran back to it every chance I got. What an insidious creature you sent after Dean, and Sam also. It took both brothers to finish him off, and that's always a plus, them working together.
| Mama's Stories chapter 12 . 4/25
Finally Dean is free.
| Mama's Stories chapter 11 . 4/25
That would be so cool to meet fairies!
| Mama's Stories chapter 9 . 4/25
Faery folk are dicks.
Do they torment everyone?
| Mama's Stories chapter 7 . 4/14
If Slendy comes now they both dead. They're to sick and injured to fight.
Sam is going to be so pissed!
| Mama's Stories chapter 6 . 4/14
This chapter is so emotional.
Dean is definitely flipping out.
Why is it tormenting the boy's. I know lost of a loved one, but why so many years, like with Dean?
What if Sam told slendy that he needed to sit down and think it all through. Would slenderman still have attacked? Haha!
| Mama's Stories chapter 5 . 4/13
Can't believe Dean would keep this from his father.
The biggest bad ass around !
How has he survived? He is now showing signs of mental breakdown.
| Mama's Stories chapter 2 . 4/10
Are they both seeing the same thing, but not being able to see it together. If they both seen it at the same time, they could fight it.
I don't know, does that make sense?
| Mama's Stories chapter 1 . 4/10
I am terrified. I don't know what slenderman is, so am scared to death!
| LunaBianca chapter 12 . 9/7/2016
Thank you! This story was so compelling, it drew me back throughout the day when I should have been working on other things. ;) It was a tightrope of physical and psychological drama and you eloquently captured the essence of Dean and Sam and their brotherhood.
Thanks for sharing!
| LunaBianca chapter 7 . 9/6/2016
Oh man. This is deliciously intense.
I was hoping Sam (and myself) would get a look at John's pages. ;)
| LunaBianca chapter 6 . 9/6/2016
Gah! I love/hate the cliffhangers!
| LunaBianca chapter 4 . 9/6/2016
Yea! This story continues to deliver good banter, great pacing and terrific suspense. Sam and Dean are realistically rendered. Thank you!
| LunaBianca chapter 3 . 9/6/2016
Curiouser and curiouser. (And scarier.)
| LunaBianca chapter 2 . 9/6/2016