|Reviews for Of Darkening Souls|
| Dagger-Seishin chapter 24 . 5/26/2014
Just a tiny hit disappointed. We had Lucius and Harry intamicy but not servers and hermione. But it was a cut story over all.
| the other witch chapter 5 . 5/17/2014
How could Hermione do that to her parents? I hope she warned them.
| Rosajean chapter 24 . 5/8/2014
Interesting story line. I enjoyed reading it. Though I will say a couple things: 1. I felt cheated at the end that we never got to witness Severus and Hermione's first time together. There was such a build up to it for chapters and then nothing. Just nothing. 2. While most of your grammar/spelling is fine, you seem to confuse the use of 'has'/'have' and 'had' A LOT. It makes the dialogue seem unnatural and breaks up the flow of the story, so you may want to have a beta look at that for you in future. Other than that, I think you came at the story from a fairly original approach and I enjoyed reading it over the course of the day.
| YeCatsJ chapter 24 . 5/5/2014
| LittleLadyGrey chapter 24 . 4/27/2014
Have fallen for this story and it had been made part of my collection that I print and get bound into books with the title and authors handle. You are an amazing writer and I am eager to read more of your work.
| Kaya70 chapter 21 . 4/26/2014
| CharmedArtist chapter 24 . 4/21/2014
GREAT story! :))) I love the relationship between Harry and Hermione, not to mention their romantic relationships with Lucius and Severus! Wonderful, wonderful :))) Thanks for sharing!
| Sakihinata chapter 24 . 4/19/2014
Well that sure was a really good story, well-written and enjoyable ;) I quite loved the pairing, particularly Severus and Hermione! First time I read about one like that. And the plot was great too. So thank you ;)
| Tirian chapter 24 . 4/18/2014
I really enjoyed this story. It was wonderful. Thank you.
| SleeplessNightsOfGrape chapter 24 . 4/17/2014
Your story is wonderfully written and has been a highly thrilling read. I have thoroughly enjoyed your take on events. There are a few that especially come to mind, though I loved all the other bits as well ;) Thanks for sharing this!
| punkyredhead chapter 24 . 4/12/2014
So I came across this story because of A Healing Touch. I loved it. I always enjoy stories where Harry and Hermione use their Muggle sense as I call it and see that their is more than dark and light in the world. I really enjoyed the Nichols in the relationships between your two couples. Also Bill being the level headed young man that he has to be to work with Goblins. Awesome work.
| Murgy31 chapter 24 . 4/7/2014
This was an amazing story... I loved it!
| Arciere chapter 24 . 4/5/2014
While I think that some of your plot points were a little rushed (Voldemort's attack and the fall of Dumbledore), I still adore this story and the care you put into the pairings. At first, I wasn't sure about Harry and Lucius, but you convinced me. And of course, Severus and Hermione belong together, and you did that so sweetly.
| thewolf74 chapter 24 . 4/3/2014
Wow. What a wonderful story. I'm happy that Harry and Hermione joined ranks with Severus and Lucius and defeated both Voldermolt and Dumbledore.
| Snarry4life chapter 24 . 3/24/2014
That was really good :) thanks for a wonderful story... I like Draco with Luna