|Reviews for The Snake Charmer|
| Kimmily chapter 42 . 11/24
So, this was really a mountain of a story and I have to say it captured me entirely. I didn't manage to do much but read this story.
And there were so many upside and downs. I am happy that they ended up together though I wanted to see Tom dead for more than half the story, as you probably intended. I would have loved some explanation of what happened some of the times and maybe I feel that Hermione should reign at his side, but maybe that is what they will be doing outside of Switzerland. Who knows right?
I would have also loved to know so much more about all the characters you have created. But that is just a testament for your good writing seeing how invested I am in all of them now. Some of the time it felt as if you were jumping around just a little to much which got me confused now and then but still it was brilliantly done and so well thought out. It is very impressive.
Tha k you so much for finishing and posting.
| HonestMistaek chapter 41 . 10/13
Gah, tom mentioning their other lives together made me sooooooo freaking curious! How does he know all about that? Gah are they soul mates? Geezus their relationship is crazy and they're both crazy. I always thought it was tom but Hermione got more lost somewhere, I'm guessing when she jumped to the 90s, and knowing she'll never be able to get to her normal timeline effed her. Oooh Dumbledore screwed her too. Manipulative ahole! Geez poor Hermione. This chapter was sad and I know tom deserved it but geez if i was her I would've gone murderous rampage! I thought the bond would've affected her somehow when he died, especially with pregnancy hormones lol gah tom was perfect towards the end (I wish we saw more of this tom!) he was so sorry and finally honest with her. You are so good at finding the perfect dialogue for them to say at the high points in your chapters! oh perseus, he really did seal his fate when he did that. Why did she let him be close at the end? Did she already have a plan for the future? Man, I'm surprised her magic and grief didn't explode at his death and burn the place to the ground.
| HonestMistaek chapter 42 . 10/13
Ughhh my emotions! I really enjoyed your writing and love the journey you took us through. It was lengthy but really well fleshed out..but I did find their relationship really flat towards the end, maybe because we never got Tom's pov? We got that sad goodbye but even then tom was still keeping his secrets from Hermione! I dunno but that sizzle that was there before American psycho tom went nuts in the room of requirement faded so much and when it finally got to their bedroom lemon scene I was like mehhh. (Not that you don't write great lemon scenes! I just read your Dr. Rizzle oneshot and hot damn). Ahh I hated how she still had her scars, i wonder if they're supposed to be a reminder that she's scarred inside and out bc of tom. Is tom messed up because he was a love potion love child? Gah, abe's immortality serum is crazy. And where was tom going during those days away?! Man, this story read like a horror fic half the time. I could imagine hearing the spooky, twilight zone soundtrack playing in the background when she jumped forward to the 90s and everything was upside down. Ahhh perseus! He was the ultimate self sacrificing hero in the end. God that was sad. I really liked how you finished it and I'm guessing tomione's bond is really what made them stick together bc their relationship was twisted af and abusive. Gah, she didn't really seem that strong after grindelwald, i was hoping for bamf Hermione! You're really good at dialogue and I have a couple chapters that I thought you did superbly! Ah just thank you for this story! I hope to read more fics from you in the future!
| HonestMistaek chapter 36 . 10/12
Honestly, i prefer abraxas over perseus with mimi. I feel like he's super passionate towards mimi since the beginning. Doesn't help that I'm a big dramione fan too. I know you have big plans for perseus bc Hermione is medusa! But still, i love abe and wish he was truly happy
| HonestMistaek chapter 35 . 10/12
This story is crazy amazing. You're always surprising us and when something happens I'm always Holy crap didn't see that coming! Omg Hermione. I can see why she stopped running, she needed a break from the chaos and etc (infinite alternate realities! ) and tom always did comfort and ground her. Gah, I really want to know about their love life. Did they finally do it? They are married...gah I'm trying to not be a perv, i really want to know bc i love how Hermione has power over in him during their intimate times lol
| HonestMistaek chapter 34 . 10/12
Arghhh I don't know what to feel! I want the happy ending but I'm torn! Tom isn't really a knight in shining armor. That was a crazy chapter, i was confused as Hermione! I loved it though. Her knights are like what's going on?! Hahah but I guess the heart wants what the heart wants when it comes to hot crazy dark lords
| HonestMistaek chapter 31 . 10/12
| HonestMistaek chapter 30 . 10/12
I'm surprised by how much shorter these chapters are but i am super freaking excited bc of the pacing! Ah I'm so confused by gridelwald, is he still a crazy murderer? Didn't he kill the montague? But i guess going from crazy guy to another who is seemingly less vicious could make her soften towards him
| HonestMistaek chapter 29 . 10/12
Nooooooo Abe nooooooo! Why did mad? She loves you! I really want him to find out what tom did to her. Poor alphard, such a good guy
| HonestMistaek chapter 26 . 10/12
Holy cow...i was like oh yeah this is going to be great! Lemon territory then boom American psycho tom and I'm like wtf noooooooooooo what just happened!? Then the knights! Ah my heart is breaking! I wish we had more Hermione pov bc i really want to know why she was supposedly all right. Crazy! I'm trying to understand what's going on between them but i get so confused. Is he crazy from splitting his souls? Ahhhhhhhhhhhh that was crazy
| HonestMistaek chapter 24 . 10/12
First of all, i just want to say I am loving all the relationships Hermione has with all these characters. You have a talent for fleshing them all out. But Omg poor Hermione, being her is so exhausting! She never gets to have fun and she has to try to be one step ahead of tom to survive. I still can't get over Tom's stabby incident! If I was Hermione, I'd never let him near me but of course she thinks of the greater good and is still there. So self sacrificing. I miss that day they had together with shirtless tom, buche de Noel, and a lemon! Great lemon! I'm not really attracted to your tom as much as other bad boy tomione fics but i love your Hermione's strength. Tom is a crazy and I love that you put the mystery of Hermione having a lot of magical power after the Burke incident! She's a special girl for sure with all the Malfoy/montague blood stuff going on and her intelligence. I honestly love the scene before tom got stabby, where she was carving into him (he deserved it! ). Omg the plot so far has been so crazy! I'm always getting surprised (the corpse, imogen, etc) lol thank you! I'm enjoying it a lot and love your lengthy chapters.
| HonestMistaek chapter 22 . 10/12
Damn, that was a crazy chapter. Feeling horrible for Hermione but damn that action was crazy
| HonestMistaek chapter 19 . 10/12
Group hug! Awww
| HonestMistaek chapter 14 . 10/11
Him saying "they'll" get a new cat was oddly cute considering what just happened. Tom and Hermione having a pet together is so freaking cute
| HonestMistaek chapter 10 . 10/11
I am loving everything and how much detail you're putting into how tom and Hermione operate. And omg they drink so much tea! Any chance you can humor us and tell us what kind they like? Love the introduction of each character so far. Hermione reacting that way at the end of the chapter was both hilarious and terrifying! Love it. At first I didn't like how she had to pretend to be French bc everytime she speaks with her French accent I always think it's so ooc but that's the point, she's acting but i love how you remind us she's still Hermione by detailing her thoughts