|Reviews for Grind|
| mytwilightaddiction chapter 36 . 10/26/2016
Awesome awesome story! I don't know how I missed this one.. Thank you:)
| Zveka68 chapter 36 . 10/22/2016
Thank you for sharing your words ladies
excellent story :)
| debnin chapter 22 . 6/5/2016
this is so romantic I cannot believe that I delayed to read this fiction so many times before1
| DELETE ME DELETE ME DELETE DEL chapter 36 . 6/5/2016
Loved reading every minuet of this story! I hope there is a guy like your Edward out there for everyone. So far unfortunately I've only met assholes, but then I read stories like these and it continues to give me hope that perhaps fiction can become reality and that not all guy's are jerks that only have one thing on there mind x
| LLH88 chapter 33 . 5/22/2016
Well, well, well, that was certainly unexpected. Great twist!
| LLH88 chapter 17 . 5/21/2016
Love, love, love LOVE this story! At first I was thinking Jersey shore but was pleasantly surprised that the setting is the west coast much more appropriate for "skaters". And you 2, your a/n's are just so amusing. Everything I read that either if you have written ALWAYS leaves me with a smile on my face. I love that you have found each other through fanfic stories & share your creativity with the rest of us. So, thank you for sharing!
| LaSpia chapter 36 . 4/17/2016
I love this story, and I read it whenever I need a boost in confidence that there could be someone this wonderful out there. Handsome, cool, intelligent, devoted. Ok, so maybe not realistic, but makes me feel good, gives me faith. Thanks to you two for your genius partner writing. Love, love it. Definitely a fave here, and I return to it often. :D
Thanks for this one!
| ChristyWIX chapter 36 . 3/17/2016
Loved their simple conversation in the hotel room, about marrying and having children. Really loved her hiring Emmett to be Bean's security guard . . . that was fantastic! She ought him home with them. Bean didn't even get a say in it, as he's so smitten with Sunny. Coming home to both families being there, and her wonderful reaction, so wonderful. Carlisle coming up from the beach and the bombshell that exploded. How horrible his parents were to both of them. How could they even do that? How could they live with themselves? What awful people. I hope he cut them out of his life. They don't deserve him in theirs. I loved that flat screen for a daughter conversation. It was hilarious. Loved his, 'You look like the girl I'm going to ask to marry me tonight.' . . . swoon! The five year jump and the girls, was fantastic. I adored those two. One of each of the parental personalities. Boys on the way. Really liked this story, ladies. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Very fun. ~Christy
| ChristyWIX chapter 30 . 3/17/2016
The talk her father had with her, truly was long overdue. I am glad he did take the time to tell her he was sorry. That he should've done better. Edward outside their home pacing and talking to himself was all kinds of adorable. I loved him meeting her dad. Him telling Bean he can keep calling him Sir, was funny. Loopy Sunny on the plane was really fun to read. We met Emmett! And, he and Bean go way back. I get the feeling there is a lot more to Edward than just the money he has made from his successful business. Is there a family business, too? Why would he need to go to NYC so often? I loved Bella's reaction to the Plaza, too cute. Their walk through the park and the picnic, was wonderful. I really liked that she was going to tell him she loves him, when he beat her to it. I wonder if that is what he said, that she did not hear? That would be a wee bit funny and all kinds of cute. Their walk back to the Plaza after the shared ILY's was great to read. As well as them finally making love to one another. That was a very sexy lemon. Floved the last line, his internal thought, 'the idea of ever sleeping alone again without her out of the question.' . . . swoon.
| ChristyWIX chapter 20 . 3/17/2016
I love that she's opening up for him, that she's living up to the nickname. That he sees it is in her and is taking the time to draw it out of her. Love that she is letting him draw out this part of her that she's buried so deeply. Very sweet first date, complete with unicorn prize and a very sweet kiss. Her finding out she likes the way he makes her feel. It was great that she got tired of waiting for Alice to come home, and went to find her. She wanted answers as to who Bean was, and knew she would get them from the girl that hid from him. It was great that she found her when she did and the way she ripped into Stretch. Learning that Jasper is older but, definitely cares about his Alice. That he isn't pressuring her for sex, was even better. Being around Bean his whole life, it was not surprising to learn Jasper's a phenom on the board. Although, I'm not sure what Stretch does/did but, it must be something with the way he was mystified that she didn't know who he was. That was pretty funny reading him flying off the handle when she didn't know who he was. I really liked that Bean got her number and was still flirting relentlessly with her via text. Asking her out. Her smiling and loving every minute of it was really cute.
| ChristyWIX chapter 10 . 3/17/2016
She's holding a lot of hate in her heart, that isn't really hers to hold. Does that make sense? I can understand the loss she felt when her mother walked out that door and disrupted their lives permanently. I'll give her that. However, she seems to hold the heartache of her father in her heart, when that is/was his burden to bear, not hers. Additionally, she is holding anger in her heart for what happened to her sister. I can understand her being angry with what happened to her sister, that makes sense. However, to close herself off from life's possibilities because of what happened to others, is not living her life to her own potential. I hope that he can help her to see this. He certainly seems determined to do so, and I am very glad he is.
| twirob chapter 36 . 2/23/2016
AWESOME! story it was great that they said two kids and end up with two pregnancies and four kids ;) shame we didn't know there names though ;) I loved how Edward was a Masen and happy with it though ;) and it was a shame there was no Rosalie for Emmett but thanks for sharing it with us anyway ;D
| Guest chapter 36 . 12/2/2015
Loved it. Y'all always deliver the best fics.
| JD Thorn chapter 36 . 10/14/2015
I agree, the ending was fabulous and I also want MORE! The whole story is fabulous. I love you ladies. Both together and separate.
| Riam chapter 36 . 12/17/2014
Great! Loved it, discovered you by accident... So now I have lots of stories to read. I'm curious if you did a wonderfull job on those as well.