Reviews for An Oath to Keep
Anonymous chapter 30 . 4/28
LIARRRR! I literally just spent an hour and a half reading this, only to find that you DIDNT EVEN FINISH IT?! Please, please, please finish it, it is sooooooo good and even though I already know what happens in the RR version, I really really wanna know what happens in this one️️️
Guest chapter 30 . 4/9
That cliffhanger...WHEN WILL THE SUSPENSE END!? lol
Guest chapter 26 . 2/4
"I'm so about that but you could've checked up on me."
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Im sorry what?
That all she has to say? After nearly getting annabeth killed? If shed cursed percy things would of been different. Im usully team leo but not when caleo is seen as the only right couple and percy and annabeth are seen as over the top for nearly dying in taretarus
G-man chapter 11 . 2/4
Ok so I think that this plot has a lot of potential, and your writing in general is good, but I don't really agree with your characterisation. To start with, Annabeth wouldn't be that irrational - she'd ask questions before jumping to the conclusion that Percy was fighting over a girl. I also don't think she'd go and sulk in her room or hide from Percy the next day because 'he'd already hurt her so much'.
Secondly, I'm having a hard time liking your Piper. I'm not really feeling that she's being the 'mother' of the group, more like she's refusing to listen to Jason or Percy and making them feel worse about themselves and their legitimate problems whilst also 'protecting' herself, Annabeth and a goddess she's known for five minutes.
If this is how you view their characters then go for it, honestly not trying to be rude or anything but if you were having second guesses about characterisation then maybe consider these. Also, in saying this, I'm not saying that this is a bad fic! You write well, you have good grammar and punctuation and you have clearly put thought into where you want this story to go - you also have over 700 reviews, if that doesn't speak for itself I don't know what does :)
lonelyperson21 chapter 30 . 10/27/2016
10/10 amazing
Mermaid.4215 chapter 30 . 10/11/2016
More PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Guest chapter 30 . 10/7/2016
I cried at the end it's so everything else beautiful. You should be a love story author
Katie Wallace chapter 30 . 7/8/2016
I'm new and I don't have an account or anything but I have two words for you: RICK RIORDAN! ;)
LostAngelx123 chapter 30 . 6/13/2016
Please update soon X\ you can't leave me hanging like that! I didn't know that Calypso was like FULLY MORTAL! In TOA Apollo was mortal but still could cross the boundaries...
Thanks for the story so far. It has been keeping me on the edge of my seat!
TEAMLEOone9 chapter 30 . 6/3/2016
THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING BOOK I HAVE EVER SEEN! Just a few things...

Plz plz plz don't end it on a cliff hanger.

Can there be a bit more action.

And can you do a bit on Zeus punishment on Leo and calypso!
AmazingGracieGurl chapter 14 . 5/20/2016
This is a good fanfiction! Like really good...it's got me hooked! I think I'm mostly enjoying the way Piper's acting about the whole Percy/Annabeth fight. It's hilarious! :) :D
sirslinkalot chapter 30 . 4/1/2016
Wait... That's it!? Nooooooooooo! I want to know what happens neeeeexxxxxxttttttt! Why!? I found this story over two years ago, when it wasnt finished, and a couple years later, I remembered how amazing it was, and looked for it agian. I found it. Obviously. But now I discover that it ended on a CLIFFHANGER? Nooooooooooo! I love the story so much, it should really be a book in my opinion. You did so great! I read this before BoO came out, and when it did, I kept getting confused as to why the story wasn't like this one because it's SO AMAZING! Again, love iy!, and can't believe it's finished. :'( :'( :'(
epicness chapter 30 . 3/20/2016
hey, amazing fanfic!
Pls can you write more?
Ava2000 chapter 29 . 3/18/2016
But I luv this story
Ava2000 chapter 30 . 3/18/2016
Grrr...l
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