Argh, everyone in this story is just annoying beyond all reason and Harry is such an angsty little doormat prick it's absolutely unbearable, he trash talks those trying to help him and acts like a slave to those that are actively against him.

Wow! This was such a good but complicated story. I finish this last chapter wishing you had finished it. But life happens to all of us and I have to assume that is why it's still unfinished. It's very hard to write a cohesive story involving more than one reality. But you have managed it excellently. Neither reality is filled with characters that are less than three dimensional. Nor are the characters exact replicas of each other. That's almost impossible to do when you are juggling so many characters. I do wonder just what exactly is Djarle up to. I know it's something she's sworn by her family line to do but as of yet I don't know if she's an enemy or not. And the attitude of the non-magical humans didn't surprise me at all. I do wonder why Harry has said nothing of the truth of the original conflict between the elven race and the human race. After all he did find out the truth several chapters back and Dumbledore is one of the family lines that survived that time. Then there is the knots in their persons that I am assuming also relate to that original betrayal. Somehow, I have a feeling that undoing those dark spots for the elves as well as the humans will make peace between the realities much easier to acquire. Voldemort is a lost soul just as the Elven King was. Everyone knows you can't summon a demon without being tied to said demon and so long as a human is tied to a demon, they can't truly be banished. So in order to deal with the evil that is Voldemort it's clear he needs to be banished just as the Elven King was. But where else you were going with this story I just don't know. I do know the truth of the original conflict will need to be outed once and for all. The black knots will need to be dealt with as well as the evil residing in the plans. And of course, Djarle and her family will need to be outed. Then Harry's future as both a celebrity to the human realm and his status as an Athar to the Elven realm. So much left to do in this story I regret it's unfished and likely to remain that way. Still it'll go on my favs and alert list. I should add not many stories do I alert.

This chapter wasn't quite as rough as the last chapter, but it could certainly due with a look over by a beta. There were enough small issues that it was rough reading.

Ok, this chapter was really rough to read as well. Again, I'm not sure if you didn't have your beta/s go over it or what, but there's a lot of small stuff that could have been cleaned up to make this a more enjoyable read. The story is still interesting, but... it's a little tough to enjoy the story with the multitude of small but noticeable errors and/or typos.

This chapter really wasn't up to the quality of the previous chapters. Not sure if maybe you didn't get the chance to have your beta/s go over it or what happened, but it was rough reading this chapter.

I love this story! Are you going to continue it?

dropped. It's surprising just how trash this is

yeeeeah trash. Really this is incredibly bad.

i think its sucks quite a bit. this ooc harry sucks balls

rofl this is more ooc harry wtf is up with this shitty personality change xD

Oh, lol, nvm, I forgot this hasn't been updated in 14 years

For some reason, you're missing dialogue in the chapters. You might want to go back and check them

wunder schöne geschichte und richtig spannend. bin mal gespannt wie es weiter geht.

LG alya88

Merci pour cette histoire
Dommage qu’elle n’est jamais été terminée
C’est la meilleure fanfic que j’ai lu depuis longtemps
Mais sait on jamais
J’attendrai la suite quand même

You know, what Harry is saying about himself being stupid and useless is actually true. Him wallowing in self pity and having no determination at all to prove that he can be better should proof enough. He wont survive this cruel world with that mindset. He really should be greatful that the dragon is quite patient with him, he acts like a spoiled brat rn. The dragon is offering him help for merlins sake! The least he can do is be respectful!