| Reviews for The Dragonmasters |
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  claraBlades chapter 37 . 11/5 Great story. I love how detailed you are. I'm able to create mental pictures while reading. If I remember correctly, you're not a native English speaker? For English not being your first language you write very well. There is only one thing. In our grammar, in almost all cases, if a word ends in ly, it comes after a word that doesn't end in ly. As an example, instead of say, Happily he danced with her, it would be, He danced happily with her. I hope this is sort of clear enough as I'm not sure of an easier way of explaining this. Anyway, great story, keep it up. :) |
 Aorta Heartless chapter 37 . 10/12 So... does the world survive? |
| Crescent Glaive chapter 4 . 9/26 It is painful to read the dragons lines... You're not using quotation marks which you should be using. At least put the dragons speech in italics... |
| NabikiB chapter 18 . 9/1 Y'know, they sound like elves who're sliding downslope into becoming Drou...Dark Elves. |
| NabikiB chapter 10 . 9/1 Select All DESELECT UNDERLINE. Save. It's annoying. |
| wolfwriter1492 chapter 37 . 6/3 I really hope that this can be continued at some point. I had a really hard time not continuing to read, especially the further I got. |
| Chyllen chapter 37 . 5/15 I know I just posted but it really pissed me off on how weak Harry got in this book stronger magically weaker mentally and emotionally as the book progressed now he might as well take it bending over without lube and asking if he's doing a good job with as much balls he has now |
| Chyllen chapter 36 . 5/15 Alright I'm done with this pancy ass Harry at first he was tough take no shit thought it would be interesting but now all o get is it's all my fault Harry I'll grovel at your feet not caring that it's thier fault in the first place he should have taken his pound of flesh from ALL OF THEM for what was done |
| lostwriterforlife chapter 1 . 4/7 Not sure if you check your reviews anymore, but when I cant find anything new to read, I commonly come back and reread this one! |
| eakeneakeneaken chapter 9 . 2/24 I'm sorry but this is fucking garbage. Sometimes there are no quotes when they are speaking and it goes like this Hey you Fuck you Garbage author Has mentally slow betas I don't know how can anyone read this dump. |
| jps986 chapter 10 . 1/15 The second half of chapter 10 is all underlines and plane has been universally replaced with plan. I don't thin you mean spirit plan at least! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2018 You have too much of an information dump here. It would have been better to slowly introduce the types of dragons as they were introduced. But other than that, this is really good. |
| Guest chapter 37 . 11/12/2018 21st for the next chapter. HA, FAT LOT OF LIES |
| Dace chapter 27 . 11/10/2018 Potter really is pathetic |
| Dace chapter 25 . 11/9/2018 Don't know potter had to obey mcgonall I would have told her to take a hike and swore her |