|Reviews for Follow Me Back into the Sun|
| Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
oh dang this is absolutely superb. it's amazing how a few words could spawn chapters in my head.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
This was so beautiful. You are a breath of fresh air in this fandom! I have never read anything like this among all the BV fanfictions and you are definitely the funniest writer I have ever encountered on here. Thank you for existing!
My favourites are:
23 (Hands) because it was so fluffy and perfectly depicts the conflicting traits of Vegeta (both harsh and gentle) all in just one sentence
31 (Star) because it was just freaking perfect
40 (Innocence) - It leaves so much to the imagination!
and 43 (Sky) because I love his beautiful, tortured and pensive nature. Plus it gave me such amazing imagery.
| jj chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
| Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
brilliant brilliant brilliant. absolutely enthralled. you have poetry and drama and life in each of them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
Wow. Absolutely simplistic and beautiful.
| ShipTheseZWarriors chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
I love them all!
| nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 1/18/2016
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING. This is not even a full story and it's hands down better than 90% of other stories in the entire DB fandom. I can't be the only one feeling slightly unworthy after reading your work. You are the Bulma Briefs of story telling.
| Guest1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
That was beautiful, thank you for sharing
| thebeastinsideusall chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
Absolutely beautiful, every word is perfection. I commend you for this .
| lovesorrow chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
Love them all! Would love to see Devotion as a one shot though, I love the idea of Bulma saving the day!
| ps.alphamega chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
How did you manage to write such a masterpiece? If it was in my hands, I'd create a Nobel prize for Drabbles & give it to you... :3
It was awfully awesome and amazing! :)
| jhamerter chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
This is so good.
| Mars chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
I read this before and forgot to review. I feel that every sentence could have been it's own story. That shows me how full of imagination and creativity you are!
| impoeia chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
This was simply an *amazing* compilation mini-viggies. You perfectly captured the essence of Bulma's and Vegeta's relationship: those little moments of awkwardness, the poignancy and the sweetness contained in the smallest acts. The attraction, but also the edge of darkness and danger; the hurt and disappointments. It's all the more impressive that you've managed to express so very much in so few words. It's an accomplishment that's left me breathless, because I know I could never summarize their relationship as well as you do. Simply an incredible piece of writing.
| catgirl26 chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
This was absolutely delightful. I can't decide which vignette was my favourite, though I've got it down to #37, Market, and #40, Innocence. The first because I feel like Vegeta's life was probably a lot of moments like that, amazing beauty and experience before destruction, and the second because it is so simple and perfect.