|Reviews for The Ugly Duckling|
| suesacrab chapter 14 . 1/6
I'm hooked on your fic...I read it all day. Please don't forget to update. U r really good writer:-)
| Jofrench22 chapter 14 . 1/2
Please don't make her forgive and forget and love edward. I want her with felix! I don't specifically want her as a volturi member but she and felix would be so awesome! Seriously, i think i started to dislike bella a little at the end of the book 2 when i read that she forgave edward after what he has put her through! Anyway, i love this story and i hope you will update soon! Bye!
| Bella1224 chapter 1 . 1/3
I would love to read more. :)
| Darkaileyba chapter 14 . 12/7/2013
Just wondering if this is a BellaxEdward story or if Bella is going to be with Felix or someone else. Just curious.
| jasperslover chapter 14 . 11/22/2013
I really like Felix. With all the information that Bella has about Edward, I wouldve stayed I think. And made my visits to the fam in between my time at Volturi. lol
| silver drip chapter 14 . 11/15/2013
I'm not really seeing how the story's title connects to the actual story as of yet. Also, why isn't Jacob listed as one of the main characters? He has had way more air time than Alice, Aro, and Edward put together.
So far good story. Nicely written. I look forward to the next chapter.
| silver drip chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
I always enjoy a good fight scene.
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| silver drip chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
Loved your description of snowfall and the sound it makes. Some of the paragraphs were a bit too bulky for my taste, hard on the eyes.
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| jgood27 chapter 14 . 11/9/2013
Love this story and can't wait to read more
| sam chapter 14 . 11/6/2013
Still loving it. More please. I did want to ask who the pairing will be as it comes up in the aro abs bella list and I do love that pairing.