Reviews for Rich Man, Poor Man : A Darker Path
BooksAreMedicine chapter 10 . 9/2/2015
Josh, he has the worst timing ever. I do like how Castle is more mature about the boyfriend since he doesn't have his cocky persona to keep up as a front in this universe. The humble thing is good for his maturing but bad in making Becket notice him and his feelings. Nice balance again, and I like how Josh entered earlier too.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 9/2/2015
Haha, loved what Becket made Castle recite, so fitting. I enjoyed reading his struggle to not leave the car, he did give it his best effort. Like how he helped her and managed to do what she said too. I would like to see more of his insights and detective skills though, I want her to respect him more than just a helpful janitor.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 9/2/2015
Ooh, love the twist with how she is fighting for him to stay. He is more humble about it though and does defer more to her authority in this story, he also waited to tell her that he knows she has a story too. Good balance between the character's nature and your AU universe. I am glad he is still a man-child here though, and how Ryan and Esposito still tease him too
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 9/2/2015
The doughnut classification was spot on, glad to see the boys still like him. Love how Becket realizes she is dating a book, lol
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 8/30/2015
Yes, it's nice for Kate to get a chance to help them, definitely would speed up their relationship since she does like to be in control
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 8/30/2015
Yay, they still speak in unison! And he still helps her see the story
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
Love how they still banter and how much more accepting she of his help since he doesn't have a mask to hide behind, plus his awesome father side is shown much earlier too
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 8/30/2015
Loved this version of their second meeting, nice to see Rick impress her and coffee is the way to her heart
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
Aw, it's cute how much more responsible he has to be and his relationship with his mother
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Their first meeting went a lot better here, I do agree that his wealth and playboy cover hindered the start where him as a janitor is not a such an obvious threat that she would fall for so she doesn't know to be defensive. The staring is a must however
fracas chapter 32 . 8/23/2015
Please can you go back to updating this/ It is one of my favourite stories.
leingh chapter 32 . 6/29/2015
Please please update
houngnum chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
such a unique prompt and basis for this story.. please keep going and update soon!
madcrafter72 chapter 32 . 1/8/2015
Well written, cant wait to read more!
hmlandon15 chapter 32 . 12/5/2014
I may or may not have gotten myself emotionally invested in this story and finding out what happens. I hope you find the time to finish it!
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