|Reviews for Sapphire Shadows|
| msmbchamp chapter 1 . 3/4
Brave choice, I am a fan of Futa and this story is very well written. You are probably one of my favorite fearless authors on FF.
| fri13girl chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Oh my goodness. I really enjoyed it.
| The 21st of March chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I have to say, I'm a huge fan of your writing. I won't lie; the content isn't the material with which I often... indulge myself, but you make it work.
With that said, I have one helping of criticism to offer. I forgot to check dust that may or may not linger on this story, or if it had been completed, but, be it for this story or the potential of another, you may want to research gender identity more, perhaps find a trans* individual to act as a sounding board.
I'm kinda in love with you for stepping out and tackling the whole genderbending thing, but it could be done a bit more gracefully. Even within the short bit of the story I read, there were various fasets that were either misinformed, or insulting-likely at no fault of your own, hakuna matata and so on-to the trans* community.
To the best of my understanding this is purely a kink piece and a sort of exploration for yourself and the reader, so please don't think of this as some overly sensitive trans* kid whining about your story and wanting to change it from a kink piece to something more, I don't know... narritive to inner struggles? I think I think the story is fantastic as is. But I'm selfish, perhaps, for a fic that uses the correct types if language and sensitivity to deal with gender identity.
| GLD chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Futa and transexual is not the same, a transexual is a person born with one gender but feels as thought they are of the opposite. Futa (futanari) is a female born with male genitals she doesn't feel as though she's a man and doesn't behave like it ether. As a transexual myself I would participate it if you fixed your mistake as it is, at least in my eyes, offensive
| korina7sports chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
when the next chapter coming out for both of your stories?
| Athian chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Really interesting idea, I'm looking forward to seeing it continue.
| Chelle chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
hey.. *pokes you* you gunna update this? Its a pretty great story. I wants more!
| L.E chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Wow, very cool story so far.
I was born a guy and identify as female, and it's awesome how well you portrayed Bella's emotions on the matter. I easily understood how she must have been feeling. Especially all that internal conflict, insecurity and penis hating.
A few little things though. Bella's transition is kinda too good to be true. The things testastarone does to the skeletal structure are rather irreversible through modern medical intervention. For her body to be as "perfect" as it is, she would either have to be particularly androgynous as man, or have started transitioning before puberty could have done it's dastardly deeds. You could solve this little dilemma by saying this story takes place "in the not too distant future" or something where medical science has advanced sufficiently.
Second, the hormones Bella would have been taking would have sterilized her thouroughly, although she might still be able to ejaculate (I honestly don't know). But STDs still exist so there's that reason to use a condom.
And, as you are probably aware, Alice was being really incesitive about Bella's pre-op status. It's entirely plausible that she would behave that way, as many people who date trans-men/women do, but she was still acting like a jerk.
I think I'll send you a PM if you want to ask me anything about transgender stuff, but I'd say you've nailed the most important bits already.
But anyway, super awesome so far I'd say. Please continue!
| Klear67 chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Awww is Bella really that small? She must have done something right ... she made Alice lose control! Please continue.
| fanficfaenatic chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Man, would you update already! I'm dying here! :(
Great writing as always.
| meridajane chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Aww. Poor Bella.
| Jeffster chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Please, please, please, continue! It'd be a shame to have Alice not confess that she's a vampire. :) :)
| TheTeenTitanMonix chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I'm usually not a big fan of futa fics but...well done. Seconds (or more) would be quite welcomed!
| WaxnWane chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I was always confused on why a guy would have a sex change only to get with a girl. Now I get it. Poor Bella. I wanted to hug her when I wasn't laughing loudly at her misfortunes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I usually hate futa, but this was pretty interesting and of course, like everything else from you, beautifully written. I'd love to see where it goes.
And I think making Alice's orientation lesbian makes total sense as well.
Looking forward to the next update!