|Reviews for Allegiant: An Alternate Ending|
| TheVictorianauthor chapter 1 . 10/24/2020
This is absolutely brilliant! Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2020
It’s nice to know I’m not the only person who did this. XD
Except I printed my version and put it on my bookshelf where Allegiant should be. It works!
| goldenzingy46 chapter 1 . 7/31/2020
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2020
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2020
This is an amazing alternate ending and I loved it! It ties up all the loose ends and leaves me feeling contented and satisfied. :)
| doesn't exist chapter 1 . 5/14/2020
hey! the ending was good and you wrote it like I wanted it to end,but the things you wrote above, the chapters 49 and 50 were a waste of time... sorry if I am being harsh; but it's just what i think and loved the ending... thanks anyway.
i used this to write it in my book report for school... and my teacher just loved it!
this is the best alternate ending i read so far,thanks a lot
| anonymous chapter 1 . 4/13/2020
| chipotlepeppers chapter 1 . 3/3/2020
Beautifully written, especially those last few lines. I hope you go on to write more.
| Noname chapter 1 . 2/19/2020
Thank you so much for this. This is amazing and I love it. I don't care what the ending in the book is because this is the real ending tris and Tobias deserved. this definitely made me feel better.
| Amity chapter 1 . 2/7/2020
Thank you for this, this is now canon for me! Tris dies? Noooo
Thanks, I no longer want to sob my eyes out anymore
| Cam Richter chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
This ending to the Divergent series is much better and less depressing than the original.
| Anonymous ping chapter 1 . 7/24/2019
This was amazing it was was really good compared to other ones I’ve read before the only fault is some spellings but apart from that it was absolutely brilliant
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
This is so cute! I think this is the true ending of Allegiant. It has the same lines of the original with some tweaks. But the two year later is so cute and I love it!
| Christine chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
Beautiful! I'm going to pretend it ended like this. I loved how you mostly stuck to the same storyline as in Allegiant, and made the style your own. The only thing I had a problem with was how when you said who they were getting together to honour, and you forgot Lynn (one of my favourite characters). Other than that, I really enjoyed this and wish it was how it really ended!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Better than the real ending!