|Reviews for Sniper Zero and Ultimatum Scenes Redone|
| Bunny1 chapter 2 . 8/29/2016
Having log in troubles, but, seriously, this can't be the end of it! There NEEDS to be more- Don's reaction best part! ;)
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/10/2015
This is the end? "ok, but you gotta find a way to tell him"? That's not an ending at all.
| HollyKalina23 chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
Please put up one more chapter, about what Colby does after they get out and about what Don says when he finds out what Ian did to Charlie. Please, pretty please?
| HotchsGirl chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
wow! both chapters are really great!
you have to keep on writing, please!
I like Ian as the bad guy. could you write more?