Reviews for The Guardian's Guild: Secret of the Stars
Red Blaze 16 chapter 18 . 4/6/2019
The second story is just as good as the first story. You have me hooked! On to story 3...
kittyKat010 chapter 10 . 8/29/2016
awww. thats so sweet
kittyKat010 chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
I actually like Cyber, wich surprises me since I usually hate OCs, but I actually like this one. Good job
kittyKat010 chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
Omg. That story. I have never heard of that kinda version of their pasts, but IT fits so well. I love It.
SusantheRedhead chapter 10 . 12/2/2015
I like your story plot lines but you seriously have to really work on your grammar. It's not technically even grammar I think, maybe word usage is a better way to phrase it. You are constantly mistakenly using words that are either spelled similarly to, or pronounced similarly to, the word you mean to use. In the AN at the beginning of this chapter you use reasonable instead of responsible. There are at least 2 or 3 mistakes like those in each chapter, if not more. It is very jarring to the flow of the story and takes away from the reading enjoyment. I get that since these are real words that spellchecker will not flag them for you, but maybe if you proofread again after you type something it would help. Reading slowly and out loud as you proofread may also help you.
AjSummer chapter 18 . 7/13/2015
Man... I thought you're first one (while short) was good.. This one was great! You are the type of author that causes me to trade in sleep for reading hours. Anyways, I really like Impulse, trickster, and evermore. The whole "we are powerful and protective thing" ~ yeah I like that. Haha! Still a little depressed you took away Risk... But at least you let QuickFire survive.
AjSummer chapter 15 . 7/12/2015
But... But... Don't ro-bo cats have nine lives too?! D: because they should! I really liked Risk. I also really liked Cyber and QuickFire but I really like cats XD
AjSummer chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
This is a great first chapter btw. (Not that any thing else you right is less then great, because it's actually all pretty great) but Bee was just so adorable and funny. "You guys are in biiiiiiiiiiig trouble" that was adorable
MisstyX0007 chapter 4 . 6/17/2015
Oh scrap!
MisstyX0007 chapter 3 . 6/16/2015
I like this alot! so happy!
Lizard LIZZY chapter 13 . 9/11/2014
I went on the transformers wika a little bit ago, and it actually mentions a medic by the name of Quickfire, though he's a lot different than yours. For one, he's a mech, two, he is a total pacifist and crys over the "oil" he's spilt, three, he's about 6 feet tall and four, he has sex with a non sentient truck from Earth. In short, yours is WAY better and is totally awesome with her attitude. Please don't ever make her even remotely like the one from canon, PLEASE!
Crystal chapter 18 . 7/20/2014
for chapter 18
I just figured it out! I just started the chapter and I just figured it out!
his 'friend' is shootingstar! HEE-HEE-HEE!
"fine! I'll 'hide' you!"
'Ratchet twirled his buzzsaw?!' now that's funny
'and proceeded to try to jump his way to the celling!' now THATS funny!
I miss cyber...
whist bee is FAR too busy trying to learn how to fly!
Crystal chapter 17 . 7/20/2014
for chapter 17
ok so...OMG u have to post this new idea! I love it! and I also love the terror twins!
I think it would do great out here in this online world!
and also...
OMG! I finally understand the whole guild thing! IT MAKES SENSE!
sorry about that I'm done with my rant
I'm going to finish this thing now!
it is literally 12:41 at night right now so I don't really know how I'm still not in forced recharge...
Crystal chapter 16 . 7/20/2014
for chapter 16
oh no u didn't! u can't just toss bumblebee around like a chew toy! he is much too fragile!
though I did love the whole torturing starscream and shockwave part *hee- hee*
that was exlirating! u write twin rampage very swell like...
I'm gonna read chapter 17 and 18 so I can start on the next thaang tomorrow so bye
Crystal chapter 15 . 7/18/2014
for chapter 15
u have no idea how many tears I shed whist I was reading this
u also have no idea how mad I am at Cyber for doing what he did
and I have the same to say for Risk
I cried and cried literally I'm not going to lie I cried like a fraggin baby
forgive my French i'm kinda mad right now.
please don't ever do it to me again I know it had to happen and u wrote it wonderfully but never do it again! with anyone that is so important Cyber was my favorite! at times more than bee ok well almost... I love stories that draw u in.

in memory of Cyber and Risk
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