Reviews for Rotted Rowan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beuuh, why did madara betray the protagonist and went with his original plan? Isn't the plan to install the no fighting compulsion more permanent than the matrix one? |
![]() ![]() Damn. Didn't know being a female instantly made you disabled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Your post chapter comments explain a lot. The whole "Madara Sama" seems a bit out of place and rushed but I am interested in how this goes. Your writing quality is top notch as I'm sure others have told you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far but something does not make sense. Your MC is extremely paranoid. To the point of having a panic attack at the discovery of having Mokuton. She is so paranoid of everyone that she does not dare tell her own grandmother who is nearly dying and ensures no living soul knows. She sees danger in the most comforting and safe of places, and yet the first time she comes across a known enemy and a dangerous one at that (Madara) she spills her guts? Extremely out of character. You built an MC who keeps secrets to the extreme and then suddenly had her spill everything to the one person guaranteed to do something about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pretty good in terms of character development and manipulation. The latter half seems a bit rushed as Naacisa turns into Owari more and more, which I guess is part of it. I feel like it got the point across. Honestly thought that the MC would die though lol. Also, to answer the final question, I feel like both are fine. I'm the type of person who likes stability, whether it's misfortune (imperfect) or perfection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was excellent! The spikes of anxiety I got when Naa found out her chakra nature, the pacing, everything was pretty great. I was not expecting the ending of this chapter at all. |
![]() ![]() BRO, OF ALL THE FANFICS I'VE READ, YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE THAT MADE ME CARE FOR THE CHARACTERS, I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. DAMN YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY WHEN KAKASHI DIED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooooo I want them |
![]() ![]() Retarded |
![]() ![]() ![]() In a story like this, a good ending is hard to write. All along I hoped Naasica would have realised how wrong she was and stopped Madara. And afterwards maybe spend the rest of her life trying create a jutsu to go back in time. This ending feels bittersweet with extra-bitter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() waste of time really . And moreover i don't think you actually know the lore that well. Hagoromo will never allow infinite Tsukuyomi to happen. Your self insert will be suddenly hugging a timelapsed Sage of six paths naruto with perhaps even a rinnegan. Good luck. And hey if you do find yourself in the naruto world in the next life don't be so stupid as this version. |
![]() ![]() This world of your si will soon be butchered with ease by none other Than Ishiki Otsutsuki. And that's what this retarded self insert of yours deserve to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() stupidly big blood explosion fore shadowing here lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story I just hoped the Ending could be elaborated even more We all know it bound to happened But, I wanted more in between you know what I mean Otherwise One of the best Naruto fict I've ever read Wel done |
![]() ![]() :warning carry on reading! Or you will die,even if you only looked at the word warning!Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person who reads this letter on Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly,by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site and she will haunt someone else who doesn’t. This isn’t fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next 10 minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. s-e-x |