Reviews for Kingdom Come
R.E.W. 4 chapter 30 . 6/26
R.E.W. 4 chapter 1 . 6/16
You know I just realized something Your OC characters name, Elyana if you rework it and take away the E it's Lyanna I cannot believe I didn;t notice that at first.
R.E.W. 4 chapter 31 . 6/16
Good chapter.
R.E.W. 4 chapter 28 . 6/16
I'm really liking your story so far, and your OC is really likable, though I would like to see her more complex in later chapters, not to say anything bad about her but I would like to see her make mistakes every now and then, like how Robb stark does, she is Baratheon and half Lannister after all Just like Daenerys, she is a good queen but s and she makes bad judgements and mistakes, but enough of my rambling. I hope you update soon in the near future.
iitrnr chapter 31 . 5/16
A very good story. Want to see where this goes. Thanks.
iitrnr chapter 27 . 5/15
I thought the deal with Frey was a bit ridiculous. She gave him far too much, far too easily. And that too for a bad ally. I would have expected it out of Robb because he's a bit stupid, not Elyana.
iitrnr chapter 15 . 5/15
I like the story, but I have to say this. I get a bit annoyed by stories where something massive has been introduced into the equation but still everything proceeds as though in canon.
iitrnr chapter 14 . 5/15
I would have thought that she would at least convince them to leave Arya at home.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/14
chap. 23, people are very easyely convised of her claim as the only real heair.. she should have shown the letter from lord Arryn, told of the incest..
Guest chapter 19 . 5/14
i like the story, except that the game of thrones start for Elyana before her Robert is dead.. she is going 4 the throne before Ned is arrested and before her father dies..
HermioneandMarcus chapter 31 . 5/9
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
Guest chapter 23 . 4/30
I hope she becomes queen of the Seven Kingdoms. Don't get me wrong, I love Daenerys Targeryen as much as the next fan but it would be nice to see your OC to become queen instead. It would be a nice change. Besides, she technically has as much claim to the throne as Daenerys because her paternal great-grandmother was a Targaryen. At the very least, I would like to see her become queen of the North and friends with Danerys because together they could make formidable allies. But I still would like you OC to be Queen of the Seven.
metaladdict chapter 31 . 4/21
I like the plots, but I honestly don't think anyone would betray her...believable at least.
AthenaB chapter 31 . 4/20
I'm so glad that you are continuing your story! I love it and can't wait to see what happens next!
Lucy Greenhill chapter 31 . 4/20
Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! xoxo
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