Oh, this was so good! Cute, but I felt a bit hurt at the end. It's a shame it's only a one-shot. It is a perfect beginning of a good story. Thank you for writing it anyways.

Sweet and intriguing and very clever Emma. I hope she finds stability with the money and fun with Killian.

That is AMAZING OMG

Please update this! I really loved it :)

I know this was posted a while ago, but it's too cute not to leave a comment. Short, but sweet. Captures their dynamic very well.

AWESOME AU. PROBABLY THE BEST I'VE EVER READ. (but I would really enjoy reading another chapter, my heart broke when I saw it was one-shot /3)

Loveee this story! Especially how reallistic Killian felt! Great job!

Please continue this! This could be so amazing- more so than it already is. I feel like it would roll better if the next time they meet, they're both older. Not that Killian has become Hook, but they should both have grown a bit in their own way- Killian should be less gullible and way more clever, and Emma should be trickier and of course, older (more womanly curves and such, for Jones' sake). It would be the ultimate combination, especially if they get into a sword fight, like Emma was the captain of her own pirate ship, or just a pirate, or just randomly in the streets. Good luck! PLEASE KEEP WRITING and edit on!

That was simultaneously cute and intense! I adored every minute! I would love for this to be a multi-chapter deal, but I'm still grateful for just the chance to read the one-shot. :) Thank you so much for sharing it!

Love it

write more! write others! they're great!

I really enjoyed this .Emma and Killian seem to have almost they same story expect Killian came from a more honest background then Emma .Its fun to read Killian as the law abiding citizen and Emma the theift I hope you continue this !

I CAN'T BREATHE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IT'S SO PERFECT AND BRILLIANT AND OMG PLEASE

hi i loved it

Omfg! Love it so much