|Reviews for Origin Story|
| Ar-Kaos chapter 27 . 8h
seriously don't worry about 'reviewers' winding you up over a different portrayal of a character, least of all a supporting character in an already alternate universe.
Write your story, your way, and if they don't like changes/ developments in characters then they really shouldn't read fanfiction or comic books. I'd cite a hydra cap for an example, or divergences between the films and the novels for another.
You're writing a story, your story, they are allowed an opinion, but that shouldn't in any way detract from your enjoyment writing, or your imaginative read on things.
Just for reference i think your story kicks ass, and have much enjoyed finding out that you have continued it.
thanks for sharing, I've got a follow set up.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26
The main character is not a gay woman, it's a man who you've given the body of a woman to. He's a straight, manly man. A guys guy, currently without a dick.
Damnit, why do people always try making Xander female?
| kitty chapter 27 . 9/24
I really liked this story. Sad it hasn't been updated in 3 years. I guess it's been abandoned. Would love to see how it ends. Love to see what happens when Alex gets back. See dancers get hers. Hope one day you will finish it. I can hope can't I?
| Abu chapter 27 . 9/24
Update soon? Please?
| Mike Clarke chapter 27 . 9/3
Hi Worldmaker. I've just finished this story so far for the third time, and I'm as satisfied with it just as much as the first time I've read it. This is a great read, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take it.
The only problem I have with it is in the way you're treating Alex's problems with magic. First of all, why did she not have worse problems with Juggernaut than with the Wrecking Crew? He's the avatar of Cytorrak, and is totally empowered by magic. Secondly, why did you decide to make her react to magic exactly the same as a kryptonian, when you've already established that she herself is a creation of magic? Would not the mode of her melding and transport to the Marvel Universe change her basic state?
Another point, which you may indeed have already thought of: when she was transported by force away from the Marvel Universe, would the forces responsible for her creation respond in some way? After all, they must have had some reason for putting her there in the first place.
Other than those points, as I said, I've been enjoying the hell out of reading this story, and whenever you add to it I'll be on it immediately. Thanks a lot.
| i30817 chapter 15 . 9/5
"But Alex had already lifted into the sky. She'd passed the sound barrier before she reached a thousand feet, and broke it again before she reached five thousand feet, and a third time by the time she reached eight thousand feet."
You probably should reword this to 'match 1, 2, 3' because there is only one time the speed of sound is broken (match 1). The '2 booms' you see in recordings are because it's both the front and tail of the ship doing the compression on match 1. Actually the 'boom' is actually continuous, but it's much more obvious as a 'boom' and not a 'rumble' only on certain distances which makes it seem notable.
| Sabre Danse chapter 27 . 8/15
Excellent ongoing story! I must say, though, I've never heard the 'two fishes' insight on the Superman emblem before. Looking forward to another installment when you are up for it. Thanks for writing!
| tatewaki2000 chapter 27 . 8/17
That was... anticlimactic.
| tatewaki2000 chapter 6 . 8/17
Tony Stark was hilarious !
U did gud
| tatewaki2000 chapter 3 . 8/17
This is the chapter that won me over! Hahahahha
| misterwhy1 chapter 8 . 8/15
Once again, thank you for writing a chapter where two pornographers were the most decent characters in America.
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/12
| Bob chapter 24 . 8/6
To the Author:
Hi! Thanks for the storyline, I've been following it with interest.
I recently read through the TV tropes page for this, and I noted that there were some spoilers there for your NEXT chapter, even though it has not been posted yet? Just wondering where they got the information, or if the story has moved.
Thanks and keep up the good work.
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 27 . 7/29
| Aesop chapter 27 . 7/25
This is an odd development. I'd thought he'd landed in another alternate universe. Dawn time traveling almost explains that. I really can't see Buffy and Faith as a couple, though.