I just found this story again and am delighted to find it finish! It's easily my favorite 'xander in a different universe' fic, mostly because it isn't quite. Thank you for writing this fun little adventure! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to check out your other stories...

I don't think you've read squirrel girls comics either man. From what I've been able to find it seems to be a misconception due to how ugly a certain portrayal of her is. She was just drawn really ugly one time and everyone said she had downs as a joke. Best I could find was a thread on a forum for squirrel owners about a guy asking if one of his squirrels has downs.

Oh yes, I'm absolutely positive making squirrel girl mentally disabled was essential to the plot. No, it wasn't needed, and just makes you come across as pointlessly edgy. That's the type of thing a cartoon bully would come up with. I feel like you just don't like squirrel girl. If you wanted to make her disabled, autism was right there. And that would've made way more sense than downs.

Saying squirrel girl had downs was so unnecessary and mean bro.

Thanks for the great story, and for working on it dispite all you've gone through!

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What does Natasha say in Russian?

Very well written

This is out of sequence, but you know that, right ?

This is so good

The way this story plays out is just wrong. If you are still liking this story after the first few chapters this if for you. Otherwise just stop reading this story it doesn't get better.

Lol ultra power up ray. lol

Damn, I really forgot how ooga booga grimderp Marvel was. It's just like Worm, with all of the characters holding onto an idiot ball. Constant conflict, unbending personalities, and people who prod at bears with sharp objects only to get angry when it bites them in return.

she mind fucked magneto without telepathy! it truly is the only way to defeat him

mc is seriously drifting away from Xanderhood.